|Reviews for Ascent II (Sequel to Ascent I)|
| Guest chapter 53 . 1/16/2013
what's going to happen?!
| Guest chapter 53 . 1/14/2013
Yaaaayyyyy! They're going to help Data and Bee! this story is just getting better and better, and let me guess - Maddox has the data chip and is going to elude the authorities long enough to make a run at B-4
| HowlynMad chapter 53 . 1/14/2013
Oh, you clever little human. You take Lore out of the frying pan and put Data in the fire. Of course, Lore is not completely in the clear. It's still a big mess all around and until it's announced to the media and often, then Lore will still be in danger. His reputation had at least settled down somewhat, now its all stirred up again. Maybe one good thing will come from a Data/Maddox showdown, maybe, Data will finally understand what Lore feels like (had felt like all these years)because Maddox isn't likely to show mercy simply because it's Data and not Lore. And at least Lore and Anna are together and Lore has a few people willing to stand up for what is right even if it is a "mad android" like Lore.
| nathasa39 chapter 53 . 1/13/2013
muy buen capitulo, no puedo esperar su actualización. deseando leer mas.
| maba7x chapter 53 . 1/13/2013
Well I hope the noose gets tighter around Maddox!
| Kharlan Hero chapter 53 . 1/13/2013
They've proved Lore's innocence. :)
Good job, Bee.
"'Please watch, Captain.' B-4 interrupted. 'You must be focused. Like me!'"
I love Bee. He's just so sweet and innocent, or something. And sweetheart definitely fits him better than Lore.
Just when you think Lore and Anna are safe, they have to go back to save Lore's brothers. Of course. If only she hadn't dropped the chip... I don't want anything bad to happen to Bee.
I look forward to whatever happens next. :)
| Cheap Trixie chapter 53 . 1/13/2013
CLIFFHANGER! DAMN YOU! I mean, I love you, please update soon...:D
| Melanie Scott chapter 53 . 1/13/2013
Yes! *happy dance* I'm really looking forward to seeing Data and Maddox face off.
She lost the chip.
SHE LOST THE CHIP! Sigh. Humans
| NordicRivers chapter 53 . 1/13/2013
I don't know where to begin. This was so amazing! First of all... YAY to B-4 and Data for finding what they need to prove Lore's innocence! Heh, seems like B-4 gets a lot of instructions from Data. He even get instructions to say "Thank you"?
"You must be focused. Like me!"
Awww. More people should be like Bee!
"And if there was one thing everyone in the Terrain system knew, it was that you did not cross Cross."
Pun intended? ;)
I love Anna's and Lore's bickering. They are so cute when they do that, although Lore sure has a very unfair advantage with his android strength and is not afraid to use it! And it's always fun to see Lore stutter like that :) Hah, if Anna really could convince people that Lore's new name was Sweetheart... *imagination taking over again, seeing B-4 and Picard and Geordi running around, calling "Sweetheart"... and Worf*
Oops. Anna lost the chip? That is NOT good. Not good at all. B-4... Maddox found it, didn't he? She lost it in his lab when she was there, and then he found it. Damn. I'm glad to see that Lore and Anna figured out the truth without the chip, but now Maddox will go for Bee instead. I hope they will make it in time. Remember what I said about hurting Bee. No doing that!
I have hopes for a happy ending. After all, I'm still curious to see what Anna's third and last demand for Lore will be :)
| lscje chapter 53 . 1/13/2013
I cannot even begin to tell you how much I want to read the next chapter!
| Kharlan Hero chapter 52 . 1/12/2013
Lore is ok! yay :)
Poor Anna, went through all that to get Lore and then thought she did something wrong while trying to fix him. At least he's better now, and will make sure Anna takes care of herself too.
I liked how you wrote the part where Lore was first waking up and recovering. It was interesting seeing it from his point of view.
I guess the end means that Maddox won't be brought to justice for his crimes... And that he'll probably show up in a part three, if you write one.
I can't think of much else to say, so just please update soon. :)
| nathasa39 chapter 52 . 1/11/2013
muy bueno, buen capitulo, me alegro de que Anna y Lore estén juntos.
| Cheap Trixie chapter 52 . 1/11/2013
Maddox sucks. This was a good chapter though.
| NordicRivers chapter 52 . 1/11/2013
Yay, Lore is back and Anna can finally get a break. Aw, understandable that Lore was afraid when he felt someone messing with his head without any senses to give him any clues. I hope he will be able to see B-4 again. They were just reunited after 40 something years.
So, Maddox is running away with his tail between his legs, eh? Not only because he's disappointed with the federation, but also because he's scared of being found out, or at least for all the negative attention. Interesting. Maddox might be a genius, but he's also quite stupid. Too eager to at least try and find out who he would have against him when going through with his plan. But then, you can't write Maddox without mad! I hope he will get something better than an arrow... Er, I mean, bullet in the knee next time.
I think it's quite amusing, how people are all looking at if Lore is innocent or not, Maddox is guilty or not, what to do next... but no-one seem to really care that Owen is dead. I mean, that OWEN is dead. It might as well be just some random stranger. I understand that Anna is very shocked and has been very worried about Lore, but still. It's a very old friend of her who was murdered. One might think she could at least take a second to say, "Poor Owen", but hey, like I said. It's amusing no-one does :)
| HowlynMad chapter 52 . 1/11/2013
Noooooooooo, you can't let him get away! You can't! UGH! As for Lore and Anna, I look forward to seeing how they are going to deal with the situation now. Hopefully, Data will step up and save the day... I have to ask myself... why is it exactly that Data doesnt want to come forward and tell everyone he's still alive? Did I miss something in the story that sets his reasoning up?