|Reviews for Parks, Cereal and People Watching|
| long-live-HP-PJ-HG chapter 1 . 11/3/2014
No one eats the non-marshmallow portion
| sundes2013 chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
| dadby chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
Aww, that was so cute and fluffy! Loved it!
| red2013 chapter 1 . 6/4/2013
great story of joan and sherlock people watching in a park.
| Phosphorescent chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
| Purple Majestic chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
This was such a sweet one shot!
| Ceu Praca chapter 1 . 12/21/2012
You should continue this. Make it a part II, where they're at the pretzel place. :o)
| Anini mouse chapter 1 . 11/16/2012
I like this one too!
| Ennui Enigma chapter 1 . 11/13/2012
Cute and lighthearted. A simple depiction yet it begins to convey a deepening friendship based on something that Sherlock, perhaps, has never known.
Especially like these few lines:
"It's elementary my dear Watson," he'd explained through a mouthful of marshmallows. "I observe and put two and two together you could do it too if you wanted to."
But she didn't. Sherlock had his methods, and she had her own.
| Erksum chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
this is really good and I hope that there will be more
| lily chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
I like this, u did good.
| IntelligentWolf chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
Aww, I liked this, it was cute! It seemed like something that would happen in the show. Keep up the great work!
| Dina C chapter 1 . 11/7/2012
The deductions were ingenious and very amusing. Loved those in particular. Good job on tracing the slow development of their relationship.
| firstadream100 chapter 1 . 11/7/2012
There are a few orthographic mistakes, but overall the story is sweet and fluffy :)
| White Belt Writer chapter 1 . 11/6/2012