Reviews for Do What Now
bazooka goblin chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
I made it with a huge paragraph for a reason, to make it look huge.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
im really sorry for saying this, i really am, theres some things you cant say without it sounding hurtful, so please dont take this the wrong way, but...have you learned how to write dialogue? like in school or something? because the way you wrote it was just a huge paragraph and the way you placed the dialogue waas WAY wrong. might wanna try getting an example from a book on how dialogue is written. again, sorry if i sounded rude, honestly.
Ecspyred chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
Oh my glob we have the exact same views about time travel O.O