|Reviews for The One|
| kjayanimefan chapter 3 . 8/5/2013
Please Update! :))
| strawhat1227 chapter 3 . 3/2/2013
Really interesting story. I'm looking forward to finding out what Lucy saw(?) Natsu do...(?) Lol..
| a random fairy chapter 3 . 1/30/2013
| Guest chapter 3 . 1/23/2013
Hahahahahahaha! Juvia is in evil mode!
| kurusui chapter 3 . 1/22/2013
Your storyline is pretty cool! Keep it up (:
| Grayluisawesome chapter 3 . 1/22/2013
I really liked it! I hope you get to update the next chapter soon! :)
| dianaloveanime chapter 3 . 1/22/2013
i love the chapter it was awsome
| dianaloveanime chapter 2 . 1/22/2013
awsome chapter i love it
| dianaloveanime chapter 1 . 1/22/2013
i like the chapter it cool i was wondering did lucy see something on the way to nastu's house like a old childhood friend that was evil and attcked lucy
| kurusui chapter 2 . 11/20/2012
I like how you wrote the scene between Gray and Loke :3
waiting for the next chapter
| kendall chapter 2 . 11/20/2012
write faster. i love these fan fictions! FASTER!
| WaterIceDragon chapter 1 . 11/8/2012
Your questions will be answered in the next chapter! Actually, you gave me an idea on what to add to it, so thank you. :) Hopefully it will be done and posted sometime next week.
| guest chapter 1 . 11/6/2012
PLEASE CONTINUE THE STORY! I have so many questions. Why was she running? How come loke didn't come out when she dropped her keys? He can feel when she's in trouble and she was obviously in trouble. these are just two of the many questions. PLEASE UPDATE!