|Reviews for As If Everything|
| Iniga chapter 1 . 9/22/2014
If you'd still like to hear, two years later, that you write beautifully...
You write beautifully. There's something about your style of writing in this piece that matches the content: the colors, the brightness and darkness, the power of nature.
Merlin and Arthur were of course in character for this moment in their lives.
I'd tell you I preferred this to what the show gave us, but that would be a backhanded comment because I would prefer almost anything to the show's ending. I've only just recovered enough from it to start looking through the fan fiction alerts I left in my email account from way back when.
Anyway, nicely done.
| Dinogeek chapter 1 . 9/15/2014
I'm not saying this is exactly what should have happened but... oh who am I kidding I totally am. This is exactly what should have happened.
| Fai's smile chapter 1 . 5/24/2014
You are right, this would have been so much better then te actual episode, but then what wouldn't? But yeah really is good. I liked the ending, it was... sweet, but not overly so.
| sword chapter 1 . 11/13/2012
i liked, i dispare there will ever be a reveal, but arthur seams to dabble in magic more than merlin!
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
I liked it! Very sweet!
| mcfuz chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
Gorgeous. Wish this had happened in the actual episode. xoxo
| That-is-illogical chapter 1 . 11/9/2012
| RicardianScholar Clark-Weasley chapter 1 . 11/8/2012
this is how the episode should have gone, damnit!
| Jester of Fortune chapter 1 . 11/8/2012
I liked it! Very nice!
| lilyflower1345 chapter 1 . 11/7/2012
great story! I really enjoyed this. I like how you ended it with Merlin showing Arthur what he felt about the cave. Thanks for writing this!
| Stripysockz chapter 1 . 11/7/2012
This is exactly what I've been looking for ever since episode 5x05 ripped my heart out - this made everything a little better, even if it brought a tear to my eye at the same time! Beautiful fic, I loved it :)
| The Majestic Dophin chapter 1 . 11/7/2012
loved it! THAT is how it should have ended!
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/6/2012
see now why couldn't this have been in the episode?! absolutely lovely
| LaelaRose chapter 1 . 11/6/2012
Oh...my... Just... Wow. That was so beautiful :') loved it :) xxxxx
| Mika271170 chapter 1 . 11/6/2012
So very good story!