Reviews for Microcosmos
Valerie E. Mackin chapter 7 . 5/28/2013
I'm kind of glad he's sticking to his proverbial guns on that one. I like change, but sometimes it's nice to have reminders of how things used to be.
Angeldolphin01 chapter 7 . 5/24/2013
I love it.
saphie1990 chapter 7 . 5/24/2013
Yay! Thanks for updating!
Angeldolphin01 chapter 6 . 1/19/2013
Love it.
thesalmonskin chapter 6 . 1/17/2013
I normally don't like stream-of-consciousness writing very much, but yours is an exception. Some authors overdo it, but you strike a good balance. Also:
""What?" He asked, needing to make sure that he wasn't dreaming." The case on 'He' should be dropped, since you're describing the action. You can treat exclamations and question marks as commas for that purpose.
""I love you." She repeated, setting the mail down." Switch the period after 'you' to a comma and drop case on 'She'. You had this problem a couple times.
It's a minor issue, and it doesn't detract from the emotions of the chapter or the evocativeness of your writing, but it is kind of a sticking point.
I liked this chapter. I like this story. Keep up the good work.
stinkysox chapter 6 . 1/17/2013
This is such a cute chapter! I can't wait for the next! Update soon! :)
Valerie E. Mackin chapter 6 . 1/17/2013
I think one of my all-time favorite Doctor Rose moments was in Fear Her in the kitchen. Just that little slip with the Doctor and Rose catching it...and you captured it perfectly he. Glad you're back however long it takes. Always looking for a new chapter.
stinkysox chapter 5 . 1/12/2013
Awww you HAVE to update soon! I love this story!
Names Have Power chapter 5 . 12/10/2012
Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oo!

Not a fluff story! I think I'll stop reading this right now.
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Hey, can you make the Doctor turn into a Time Lord again, then have Rose die and regenerate due to her exposure to the Time Vortex? That'd be great. :)
Angeldolphin01 chapter 5 . 12/10/2012
I love it.
saphie1990 chapter 5 . 12/9/2012
Not nearly enough! looking forward to the next chapter!
Valerie E. Mackin chapter 5 . 12/9/2012
When it comes to the Doctor, I tend to enjoy fluff, drama, and most things in between, so as long as you're feeding me chapters, I'm happy.
Angeldolphin01 chapter 4 . 12/2/2012
I really like the story so far. I look forward to the next chapter.
planets-in-the-sky chapter 4 . 11/26/2012
Short, but sweet - and very powerful indeed. You've got me with that last line. I love the way your writing is structured. Poor TenToo, though he is very right to be paranoid.
Guest chapter 4 . 11/25/2012
lovely and heart-breaking at the same time...waiting patiently for your update.
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