Awww the way you write hurt rob is just so wonderful

absolutely delicious soup, good soup, amazing soup. nice job mate

usually I don't review finished fics till the end, but I have some qualms here.

When the heart stops, it stops pushing oxygen to the brain. Carbon-Dioxide poisoning having its own slew of problems but let's forget about that for now.

the brain can survive 2 minutes at MOST if that before irreversible brain damage occurs. Dick was not only lacking air, high on Carbon-Dioxide poisoning, and without a beating heart, but it took the team 8 minutes to get there. After Five a person is brain dead. so let's say, that dick only lost all air and heartbeat within that five minutes. He'd be SEVERELY brain damaged from the lac of oxygen- and this is once again ignoring the carbon dioxide poisoning.

something that bothers me in super hero fics is that people can just be literally dead for minutes- hours sometimes and be brought back by CPR with not consequences. if it was M'gann or Superboy or even Wally... maybe. But Dick is human, 100%.

the drugs from 48 hours before would be the LEAST of Leslie's worry's for him.

ALL THAT ASIDE I LOVE THIS FIC! Don't get me wrong its amazing, phenomenal, and I'm saving it forever. I'm just tired of superheros being OK no matter what. they don't just bounce back. if your gonna put a character through something do it properly, its more interesting that way anyhow.

but o digress and I love this fic. I binged it. amazing job author-san

Aww Wally showing love through sharing food!

Love the description of Bruce

This is so goood 3

This is the 3rd time I'm reading this story, I've come back to it twice on my journey to read more angst because it's just so damn good. And that last chapter? Ugh. SO cute.

Wow this is so good I really like it

ok but after hes rescued i really hope you dont pull a criminal minds and have him be addicted to that drug. bc that would be bad. and i would hate you forever :)

wait a minute...
in the movie Sicario: Day of the Soldado, there was a kidnapping plot of a 13 year old as well. with another mexican cartel. coincidence? i think not
ngl imma rewatch that movie its pretty good

id just like to say that batman does not need to "explain" how he knew it was jonah. hes the worlds greatest detective AND he doesnt have to explain himself to anyone, its not like hes deputized

i almost feel bad for these guys ngl
bruce is going to rip them to shreds

Definitivamente me gusto, felicitaciones por tu historia

Nothing like an emotional rollercoster to get you through life

the feeling the aster thing was genius and a great fucking ending to this story lmao. you continuously hit me with the feels every chapter so thanks for that. and idk man i suck at words but this made me extremely happy. especially when you explored all the relationships between the characters: bruce/dick, flash/dick, flash/artemis, supes/batman etc idk it's super fun to read.