|Reviews for Atonement|
| sirensoundwave chapter 6 . 9/5
Good but so sad. At least everyone sorta got a happy ending...
| Maybe2Morrow chapter 6 . 8/22
This and the first installment were amazing. I cried so hard these last two chapters, I'm glad I was alone at the time lol I was bawling! Thank you for writing and sharing!
| Guest chapter 6 . 8/17
So sad and beautiful, I'm not sure which ending is better now...
| Guest chapter 6 . 8/17
This was so beautiful, but heartbreaking at the same time...
...Thank you for writing this beautiful and emotional work of art.
| Amelia Loves Anime chapter 5 . 8/7
You know, I almost like the ending in Penance better, just because it means Sirius didn't suffer as long, and I believe(and refuse adamantly otherwise) that Sirius, after he died (even if it was Truth that took his life) he'd end up in the same place as he did in this story. Anyway, you're a fantastic writer, and I loved both your stories! (No matter which ending I favor!) Thank you for writing them!
| Amelia Loves Anime chapter 6 . 8/7
This story both makes me ridiculously happy, and ridiculously sad. You did an amazing job writing it, thank you. 3
| artisticAnnoyance chapter 6 . 7/28
I strted crying oh my god this was amazing
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/18
I like this ending much better!
| WolfishMoon chapter 6 . 4/30
Oh, gods that had me sobbing. Literally sobbing.
Beautiful piece. Really.
Excellent ending to Penance.
| DreamRealm3 chapter 6 . 4/25
Im crying my freakin eyes out!
God I want to murder you! Im so freakin sad,
| Dante Morose chapter 6 . 4/16
You did your work a little too well. I loved "Penance" and this alternate ending as well, but the way this ended makes me feel disconnected, unresolved, and disturbed because it was a happy ending for all of them, but at such a terrible price. It's been a couple hours since I finished reading this, but the feeling I got when reading it is still with me, and nothing I do shakes it off. As stated before, you wrote this a little too well. Incredible job. Now, if you could tell me how to get rid of this all-encompassing dark and empty feeling...
| Guest chapter 6 . 2/15
This is the sixth time I've reread "Penance" and "Atonement", and I loved it each time. You do a wonderful job of portraying both fandoms and characters, and the ending is so bittersweet but perfect! I'm also sad, but of course it makes 100% sense, that the HP characters will never have their questions about Ed and Al answered, or get the closure of knowing they returned home. I know you might be done with this particular story, but I look forward to reading your next FMA or HP story!
| ArcanePracti-Cat chapter 1 . 1/19
I also feel REALLY lucky that I got to this after you've completed it. I don't know if I'd have survived if it was incomplete... probably would have chucked my computer... xD
SO terribly captivating...
| ArcanePracti-cat chapter 6 . 1/19
YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT YOU'VE DONE TO MEEEEE
T.T Dx T.T
This story is one of the few that make me cry EXTERNALLY, rather than just internally. I mean, like, physical, actual tears are welling up hereeee...
Penance and Atonement are two really REALLY well written stories. I absolutely love how you found an end to this, too- it was ABYSMALLY realistic for their situation, incredibly enthralling, and darkly intense, and yet you ended with that little lighter touch that makes the dark bearable...
All in all, this is definitely a story I'd recommend to people if they like this kind of genre.
Thanks for all your work.
| ArcanePracti-cat chapter 5 . 1/19
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