|Reviews for Atonement|
| Kazaru13 chapter 3 . 1/29
gosh dangit poor sirius... He just cant win... I like this ending too! More I think!
| sierra.steinbrecher chapter 3 . 1/23
I think you should just add these chapters onto the ending of the other fic. I like how Sirius is settling in, but he'll have an easier time of it than Ed and Al, I think.
| meladi1 chapter 3 . 12/1/2013
when i think about it, you have right Hughes and James looks alike
| CookieMonsta1233 chapter 3 . 11/20/2013
This story should be put as finished as this seems to be a fantastic way to end it!
| rabbit keys chapter 3 . 11/2/2013
THIS BROUGHT TEARS INTO MY EYES
I'VE FALLEN FROM BART'S HOSPITAL AND I CAN'T GET UP
I NEED LIFE ALERT
| BrookCarvr chapter 3 . 10/30/2013
This story is amazing. I have never read anything like it before. Great job at writing Ed, Al, Sirius and Mustang. Everyone is in character but especially those four. I really enjoy reading the chapters. Please update as soon as you can.
| JoojooBrother chapter 3 . 10/29/2013
*cries some more and goes to bed*
| Saffygirl chapter 3 . 10/23/2013
Can't wait until the next update!
| Random chapter 3 . 10/21/2013
Aww...this chapter is so sweet. :)
| urbangirl98 chapter 3 . 10/20/2013
Yes! You updated! Thank you thank you! This chapter was just amazing! I'm glad that they got to learn where they were all this time! That part was great.
I also like the interactions between Roy and Siris! They'd be great friends XD
| GBlackwell chapter 3 . 10/20/2013
Yes! You updated! That's great! I hope you're starting to feel okay, though...
Anyway, this chapter was good: It's mainly filler/transition that answers basically all the mundane questions of what comes next (like, where does SIrius stay, how would he feel about being in this world, etc...) but the emotional side is still there, while not being exaggerated so as to be melodramatic. Everyone's happy and relieved, because things have pretty much turned out okay, but there's still a lot of loss that's happened along the way, so there's a bit of sorrow behind everything.
I've just realized how hard it's going to be for Sirius. He's glad to be alive, but he has no family, no friends, no magic... what's he going to do now? It's not going to easy, and though Mustang's group is by no means unkind, it's not like he's magically (no pun intended) going to a form a bond with them that makes for his loss of his other friends. And he's there FOREVER.
But anyway, my main question is: what is this building up to? I mean, when this was a one-shot, I could have accepted the overall feeling being "Oh yeah, Sirius is alive and glad to be so, but slightly unhappy about everything." But now that it's longer, and still incomplete... this has to lead somewhere, and it has to lead somewhere that ends up with Sirius in a different place than before, emotionally or spiritually or whatever. And so far, I have no hints of what the conflict might be that will kickstart that, or whether this will be a conflict-y story at all. I just don't have any idea of where it might go from here.
Either way, though, I'll keep reading and I'm sure I won't be disappointed. :) Thank you for writing!
| Yoshi-Strange chapter 3 . 10/19/2013
You are going to break my heart one of these days! TT_TT That was so beautiful, lovely, sad and angsty all at the same time! You have me close to taers now!
Just beautiful. You have such a gift when it comes into putting some else's shoes on, don't you? I can't imagine what will Sirius' reaction will be when he meets the Rockbell's. Tha would probably shatter what's left of my heart.
| Vendelareader chapter 3 . 10/19/2013
YOU UPDATED, YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!
Great chapter, Elysia and Sirius where so cute! And then you just had to make it all sad didn't you? Anywho, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. _
| DeathBySugarCube chapter 3 . 10/19/2013
I'm really glad to see another chapter of this :) And don't worry, you have a faithful follower right here; and I shall be reading this until the end :)
| lotrprincess chapter 3 . 10/19/2013
Oh, Elysia is just like her dad :'D It's so sweet and sad. Maybe she'll grow up to be a kidnapper too :)
Do you know, this is the first HP/FMA crossover I've read that puts a wizard in Amestris. It's ALWAYS the other way around. Why is that?