Reviews for When It Alteration Finds
fairemaiden Azkadelia chapter 1 . 3/5
so good! I picked up Hermione's quote and even got the chocolate cake for breakfast reference. and I completely agree with all the other comments... I want to dad Draco's books. also I love what Harry told him about all the things he had done. I completely agree with them. of course, I love draco!
Riya1112 chapter 9 . 6/29/2017
Wow. This was just Wow. It's amazing. I loved it. Please do a sequel. I would also like to read Draco's first book.
bloodyredfox chapter 9 . 12/1/2016
Now I really want to read that book he wrote...write a short fiction on it please...!
lyra59 chapter 9 . 11/15/2016
Kinda went backwards reading all your fics! The style is great, is easy and fun to read. The plot is interesting, I loved it from beginning to end. Please please, get into another HP fic?!
Domhanda chapter 9 . 7/8/2016
What a great story. The most amazing thing a writer can do in my opinion is to make a reader fall in love with a place. Falling in love with people is easy enough, but to fall in love with a place needs writers skills. I must admit I was in love with Guernsey before reading your story. If you like it and really wish to fall for it I can only recommend 'The Guernsey Literary and Potatoe Peel Pie Society'. It is a letter novel about a young woman who tries to find the fate of another woman after she disappeared from the island during the second world war. During her search she falls in love with Guernsey and its people. It's light and slightly melancholic to read, it touched my heart.
Sometimes you put in too much information, as for example the fact about the good bus service system on Guernsey. I think you wrote that three times. Also the info about Teddy's illness was a bit long and confusing for someone who doesn't know any medical procedures.
Still the story was insightful and lovely to read.
Thank you.
Roxiewolf22222 chapter 2 . 5/4/2016
This is really really good! Every time i read what somone else wrote i think the same thing as draco does but, so far its really really good!
Murasaki Hina chapter 9 . 4/23/2016
I love this! I actually want to read the book Draco wrote. Looks on Tempests. This was amazing and you are beautiful darling.
Cherweeze chapter 9 . 4/3/2016
Love the plot, thanks for sharing.
AlwaysAnAussie chapter 9 . 12/6/2015
perfect ending and perfect quote. I've only just found your fic and so glad i have. your writing style is easy to read, so rich in character and detail. I can't imagine the time and research you put into these stories but personally so thankful that you do. brilliant ideas and wonderfully written. TY for sharing your talent
AlwaysAnAussie chapter 8 . 12/6/2015
ugh you're killing me. this is breaking my heart on different levels now.
AlwaysAnAussie chapter 7 . 12/6/2015
oh my I want to cry for them too. god you're brilliant.
AlwaysAnAussie chapter 6 . 12/6/2015
oh and Harry's reaction to Luke's simple honesty gw made me want to hug him
AlwaysAnAussie chapter 6 . 12/6/2015
wondered why Harry hadn't clued in earlier. how many Luna's could there be in Britain who are described as loony with eccentric jewellery tastes.
AlwaysAnAussie chapter 5 . 12/6/2015
this is almost heartbreaking. its so beautiful my heart is aching for this to work out for them.
AlwaysAnAussie chapter 2 . 12/6/2015
aww I always love Luna. you're Recognise me not charm works wonders. I'm really liking the vibe btw them and can't wait to continue. if I don't comment it's because I'm engrossed.
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