erenirsantanna chapter 25 . 2/22
Maravilha! Arrasou Anastasia De Silva. Continue, sua escrita é bonita! Continue, por favor... Okay? Somos seus fãs, atenda nossos pedidos. Queremos a continuação. Você pode! Beijos!
erenirsantanna chapter 24 . 2/22
Putz! E só mais um capítulo? Oh! Meu Deus!
erenirsantanna chapter 23 . 2/21
erenirsantanna chapter 22 . 2/21
Está melhor que o original, mais dinâmico, tem mais vida. Gostei muito... Está elétrico!
erenirsantanna chapter 20 . 2/21
Linda, você!
erenirsantanna chapter 17 . 2/21
Muito bom, corrido, com muita dinâmica, eu gosto. parabéns!
Rmoure chapter 25 . 12/30/2016
Since it seems like this is the end? Do we assume Elena was behind this?
montana.dykes95 chapter 25 . 11/3/2016
Please keep going with this story, it's such a great one.
Twinder chapter 25 . 4/18/2016
Excellent story. I can't wait to see where you take it next
carla.rbaptista chapter 25 . 4/15/2016
Adorei está história, parabéns. Espero ansiosa pelos próximos capítulos.
Guest chapter 14 . 4/2/2016
English is not your first language, is it? That's why your story doesn't flow. The dialogue is choppy. The comprehension has holes in it. Get a beta!
Guest chapter 14 . 4/2/2016
I can't keep reading this. There are so many grammar errors, punctuation is missing, incorrect words used. Did you ever use spell check or grammar check? Your Christian comes across as a very pale, weak character, which means you totally misread him. How can a wimpy guy become a billionaire at a young age? He couldn't! He has to have substance to make the story work. Rethink it! Rework it! Try again.
kushka chapter 25 . 12/27/2015
Repetitive. Eh
Pepperanne chapter 25 . 11/24/2015
Please continue.
Guest chapter 25 . 11/17/2015
Where's the rest of the story? Why waste reader time
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