Twinder chapter 25 . 4/18
Excellent story. I can't wait to see where you take it next
carla.rbaptista chapter 25 . 4/15
Adorei está história, parabéns. Espero ansiosa pelos próximos capítulos.
Guest chapter 14 . 4/2
English is not your first language, is it? That's why your story doesn't flow. The dialogue is choppy. The comprehension has holes in it. Get a beta!
Guest chapter 14 . 4/2
I can't keep reading this. There are so many grammar errors, punctuation is missing, incorrect words used. Did you ever use spell check or grammar check? Your Christian comes across as a very pale, weak character, which means you totally misread him. How can a wimpy guy become a billionaire at a young age? He couldn't! He has to have substance to make the story work. Rethink it! Rework it! Try again.
kushka chapter 25 . 12/27/2015
Repetitive. Eh
Pepperanne chapter 25 . 11/24/2015
Please continue.
Guest chapter 25 . 11/17/2015
Where's the rest of the story? Why waste reader time
kushka chapter 25 . 11/13/2015
Good story
Guest chapter 25 . 10/31/2015
Another cliff hanger. Do writers think this is writing? Mayo suggest literature classes.
tiguesbunnies chapter 25 . 8/27/2015
Hope you update. I have enjoyed the story so far.
mileydi chapter 25 . 8/16/2015
Love it please update soon.
mrskoz chapter 25 . 8/11/2015
Have you abandoned your story?
Angel21702 chapter 25 . 6/30/2015
I hope you pick this story back up and finish it! Great story needs an ending:)
nivenchsh chapter 25 . 6/16/2015
Please continue with the story!
beatrice1975 chapter 25 . 6/7/2015
Maybe Ana is pregnant! But please update!
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