HHERALD chapter 1 . 5/6/2013
please don't stop writing... you are doing a really good job...
awesdu chapter 19 . 4/4/2013
TheGrey'sFan01 chapter 19 . 4/3/2013
Great Chapter!
Hard Pouncing chapter 19 . 4/3/2013
ok, somewhere along the line you are losing me. Christian has had a remarkable turn around from Dom to regular boyfriend. You are certainly leaving out all the sex and bdsm scenes he would enjoy. Ana has gone from Sub to blah - you are not enfusing her personality, rather depersonalizing her. Try to restructure how you had her when she stood up to the bdsm and chose a different lifestyle. She can enjoy it now or not - your story - but you need to refind her and give her a voice back. good luck!
jnie3 chapter 19 . 4/3/2013
Kate is safe and lucky to have friend like Ana who would care less about herself to protect/save her friend. thanks another great chapter.
p/s - just wondering, any update soon on Dejavu..
kelmal chapter 19 . 4/3/2013
Another great chapter.
Cynthia74 chapter 19 . 4/3/2013
Please update soon...
Luvdisney2007 chapter 19 . 4/3/2013
I was actually shocked that Christian allowed Ana to go even with then tracking her. At least Kate was okay and the wedding still a go. What a way to spend the day before your wedding.
jnie3 chapter 18 . 4/3/2013
oh my Kate is missing... thanks for the update..
princessrolon chapter 19 . 4/3/2013
Great chapter, again :)
Louisvuittonfreak chapter 19 . 4/3/2013
Good to see they found her ... Sick ass people.
Christian618 chapter 19 . 4/3/2013
Cool chapter but somehow the bitch troll is still looming out there!
R-J briggs chapter 19 . 4/3/2013
Very good chapter loved it can't wait for more
greyfan 79 chapter 19 . 4/3/2013
Really good thank you
iamkaren10 chapter 18 . 4/2/2013
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