truefeather77 chapter 5 . 3/16/2014
He hits her because "she's not taking care of herself"? How does she figure that? He never informed her about any threat, let her walk around in ignorance so it could attack her blind, and SHE's the one not taking care of her? She had to defend herself against Hyde, even though he knew Hyde was not just an office masher, but a serial rapist. She had to defend herself against Leila, even though CG knew Leila was stalking him, because he wouldn't tell her what was going on. Both times she's been completely capable of protecting herself, and had to be because her "protector" completely failed. He never wanted to keep her safe, just to KEEP her. There's a big difference.
truefeather77 chapter 1 . 3/16/2014
Just re-read this, and GRRRRrrrr! Why does everyone hold Taylor exempt from any wrongdoing? He leads the charge with illegal surveillance, acts as pimp and pander, violates Grey's victims on command, participates in lies and the suborning of young women - all because the pay is so nice. He's a bigger SUB than all of CG's victims rolled together. And he has the nerve to reiterate the "He's a good man" advice? Ana is someone's daughter, too, and any man with a daughter should have more of a sense of decency to encourage her to trust him.
anga larte chapter 25 . 2/6/2014
Oh dear poor Ana, he is gonna be even more protective now!
I'm pleased he told her about the threats rather than keeping her in the dark.
Brilliant chapter hun x
swettow1 chapter 25 . 2/5/2014
great! can't wait for the update ;)!
Cynthia chapter 2 . 2/5/2014
I feel like you need to write in a little more emotion. The writing seems a tad robotic. Also, Christian is a CEO, he wouldn't speak so childish
Guest chapter 25 . 2/5/2014
story just isn't there any more. too many gaps between updates.
Guest chapter 25 . 2/5/2014
Hmmmm I say Elena hired a hit man. Please update soon.
mic476 chapter 25 . 2/5/2014
I wonder who's after Anastasia? Elena, Leila, Jack, Elena and Leila.

Post more soon.
R-J briggs chapter 25 . 2/5/2014
Great chapter can't wait for the next
pookiebear3 chapter 25 . 2/5/2014
Ok Ms. Ana have you learned to just tell him b when something's wrong ?! You know it still be worse when he finds out later.
greyfan 79 chapter 25 . 2/5/2014
So glad you updated can't wait for more and who is after ana xxx
sweetpea82 chapter 24 . 1/29/2014
Please keep going with this story. .I love it so far
Debby10 chapter 24 . 1/19/2014
are you still writing this story? WHEN WILL WE FIND NEW UPDATES?
kelmal chapter 24 . 1/17/2014
Another great chapter again.
kelmal chapter 23 . 1/17/2014
Another great chapter.
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