Reviews for Unexpected Visitor
Hazmatt chapter 1 . 2/21/2013
Great story! I really enjoyed it!
Tempe4Booth chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
this is beautiful i wish they did this
Lil chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
This is such a great start to a story, I hope you plan to continue it. :)
Lindsaylove15 chapter 1 . 11/7/2012
Great story! And beautiful explanation, it doesn't seem unrealistic, you did absolutely fantastic expecting to see more fanfiction from you ;)
Iamnotafrakkingcylon chapter 1 . 11/8/2012
Hey you!
I like the idea of the story, it isnt very realistic, but thats why we call it fanFICTION, right?! There were some little mistakes, but they dont matter that much. I am not that familiar with the comma rules in UK and USA, maybe their different, so I cant say anything about it, its just not how we in Germany would do it... Anyway, I hope my review was helpful to you it was really good for a first attempt!