Reviews for The Mirage Blade Fox
Guest chapter 13 . 7/24
DarkSoul16 chapter 11 . 7/24
I'm having trouble undwrstanding the pairings... Are they with Naruto? Or are they with Hayate, Asuma, and Iruka and just use Naruto for fun lol.. Aside from Hana of course
Squarekiddo chapter 3 . 7/22
I truly like the plot, and the first chapter? SUPERB amazing, I never ever gotten attached to something so fast as I did those foxes, it actually hurt when I thought they died.

But now... your starting to make less and less sense the further your going, a 12 year old asking to date for 19 year olds at the same time out of the freaking blue, and he got OOC every other second.
Its like you dont have a goal, just running around in odd circles hoping to score.

Anyway, good luck in the future.
nahte123456 chapter 32 . 7/17
Would the 'touch' be more or less effective against Naruto, and wouldn't the step three technique stop that "I am fear and fear fear's nothing" or whatever(I'm bad with names OK!)?
nahte123456 chapter 31 . 7/17
...How exactly does the 'touch' work? Is it basically the Penance stare only with fear? I'd also question if it mattered since Naruto was holding back as well, but that doesn't actually matter, it didn't happen so whatever. I love this story, but re-reading this it just seems weird, Kushina randomly having an 'insta-win' move we've not heard about before despite Naruto having the same line of abilities and Kyuubi actually causing both abilities.
nahte123456 chapter 30 . 7/17
Soo...If not for being emotional he would have kicked her a**? Because that's what it seems like. Also it's things like this that makes this more than just crack, it's touching, even if only a little.
BartWLewis chapter 35 . 7/8
Love the story! The later chapters had me cracking up.
DOCTORWHO1267 chapter 2 . 6/28
I would make sure sasuke never gets his sharingan and visits ibiki, change kakashis icha icha books to gay porn & have the 3rd hokage ban him from buying anymore of those books, have anko scare sakura & have kurenai put a high level genjutsu which involves sasuke & many different men
kit chapter 2 . 6/24
Stabbed by thousand kunai knifes and windmill shurikens!
helrio uzugaku chapter 33 . 6/25
Second Funniest thing I've ever read. But a strong second. Good drama added. The occasional misspelling but nothing noticeable.
Guest chapter 11 . 6/12
Guest chapter 26 . 6/11
To be honest, I may be late to this cake, but your way of writing is 10/10 literally, the way you made Naruto in this story has given me the giggles. Keep up the good work with your stories XD :)
me chapter 3 . 6/8
ive red this story alot and i lve it
Guest chapter 35 . 6/6
your most previous review was from AssassinNinja. (don't judge by name) BBBBYYYYYEEEEE
Guest chapter 34 . 6/6
this was so good... I had to go back and reread it. I remember when this fanfiction wasn't even finished and it was still pretty good. good job man(I say 'man' to everybody even not sexist) im going to your profile and reading other fanfiction you have written by the time u read this.
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