|Reviews for Careful What You Wish For|
| sandcat118 chapter 2 . 11/3/2014
OH MY GOD I effing love your sense of humour, your writing style is pure fun to read, and I gotta say the only reason I wasn't outwardly cackling with delight is because I'm in class right now (the lecture is about to start, I'm not quite ready to read fanfics DURING a lecture ;)
Awesome, awesome work. As soon as I have more time I'll get crackin' on the following chapters :D
| KimiEvenStar chapter 28 . 5/11/2014
Oh my goodness. I found this right when I wasn't able to sleep and needed a good distraction. I get that Mary's first love in this story is Praji and that it's passionate. For some reason, I found myself loving the Luke and Mary pairing. I have to say your story charmed me right off the bat! I'm glad there's a sequel because i surely can't get enough! I read through it in ONE sitting which was a pure pleasure for me :) I can't wait to read the next story tomorrow.
| Nargus chapter 18 . 1/18/2014
Err...have anyone told you that princess girl OC is really...I dunno...so fanatic to the verse it reach the end of the scale and looped back to the other side?
| Pokemon Trainer Josiah chapter 1 . 8/28/2013
| jaderook chapter 16 . 8/21/2013
I remember going to the first Twilight movie myself. I recall checking my phone constantly to see how much time had passed. Then, I remember looking directly at my husband and saying, 'Do you think they'd give us a refund? Or- maybe we could sneak into another movie.' It was painful to watch.
Anyway- I love your fic here. Your character reminds me of a female Tony Stark stuck in the Star Wars movies. It's awesome. Definitely keeping my interest.
| Hoplite39 chapter 28 . 6/6/2013
And so it ends. Or at least the first part. A strange mix of dark and slapstick humour; philosophy and craziness, in which Mary fights her own contradictory fan fantasies.
The last chapter was good, wrapping up the first part and explaining what Mary has to do, even if we still don't know really why she got there.
The scene at home was a nice touch, as was the discussion with aurora.
Well onto ESB, part 2. So I'm totally up to date now. :)
| Hoplite39 chapter 27 . 6/6/2013
An interesting insight of what victory for Thrawn or Vader might look like in a reservedly dark humorous way. You've got to love the idea of Empress Aurora though.
| Hoplite39 chapter 25 . 6/6/2013
Aha! Mary actually experienced all that Chiss porn in her memories because she really wanted it. I knew it. And now I suspect it's Mary training Luke.
| Hoplite39 chapter 24 . 6/6/2013
Oh, poor Farmboy. The nice guys never win in the game of love.
It's good Mary remembers who she is again. Actually, this story is kind of likeSomething About Mary with everyone trying to get with her.
| Hoplite39 chapter 23 . 6/6/2013
Now we see the purpose of Hater's dastardly plot. Very well done. I didn't expect that.
Yoda didn't try his "I know Yoda trick." Nor try to steal her ration bar. Or is that why Mary is shooting him...?
Next time I pick my nose, I am going to remind myself that I am searching for Dagobah. In fact, I am rolling a Dagobah between my fingers now. I'm sure you didn't want to know that though.
Amazing that Mary still has the hots for a minor character who probably wouldn't even have a name if the movie had flopped.
| Hoplite39 chapter 22 . 6/6/2013
So Vader is a porn fan. He obviously watches a lot of kriffing then.
| Hoplite39 chapter 21 . 6/6/2013
That was a good chapter. I like it when the conspiracies of the bad guys are laid out in the table. So Mary could be a sixth Queen. You have to admit, it must sound tempting.
I loved the bit with Yoda:
"Gone shall you be before Your asses I shall kick" - :D
| Hoplite39 chapter 20 . 6/5/2013
I still find it funny how Mary pines after Praji, a very minor character in the movie. But a massive love hunk in this story.
| Hoplite39 chapter 19 . 6/5/2013
I enjoyed very much the references to Game of Thrones. So Cupcake is everyone's puppet. And if she won't remember the last conversation how did she write this. Perhaps we will find out soon? Or perhaps it was automatic writing.
| Hoplite39 chapter 18 . 6/5/2013
Oh, we'll the fun star was destroyed. I'm almost sad to see it go. And it was Darth Cupcake who really destroyed it. If Farmboy hadn't been daydreaming about her it may never have happened. It just shows the power of a teenage crush. In a sense Cupcake 'crushed' the Funstar.
It looks like Hater wants the trilogy to go ahead as planned.
Perhaps Cupcake should trust him more. Actually, Dsrth Cupcake isn't that bad a name, considering the names floating around in eps 1-3.