Reviews for Careful What You Wish For
Guest chapter 27 . 7/13
Name's Anthony and this story is very good. Love the references and fourth wall breaks! Mary is very cool.
ImperialGirl chapter 16 . 6/11
Okay, crackfic or not, Dark Side or not, the escape/first kiss for Lorana and Thrass is...rather sweet. (I'd say I'd like to have seen Thrawn's face when he finally got there to rescue them and found out what was going on, but then again it's Thrawn. He might have raised an eyebrow.)
Guest chapter 3 . 12/25/2015
Yeah, she better get Thrawn and Vader, with Emperor on holo-conference right now. And talk about the goddamn Far Outsider. Alliance and its successor New Republic is ill equipped to handle Vong. And Starkiller, aka the Galen Marek is a key personnel here. You need to get the Emperor to clone as many Starkiller as possible.
Didicit Viator chapter 28 . 9/9/2015
I have no idea why this story has such little recognition. Great job.
sandcat118 chapter 2 . 11/3/2014
OH MY GOD I effing love your sense of humour, your writing style is pure fun to read, and I gotta say the only reason I wasn't outwardly cackling with delight is because I'm in class right now (the lecture is about to start, I'm not quite ready to read fanfics DURING a lecture ;)

Awesome, awesome work. As soon as I have more time I'll get crackin' on the following chapters :D
KimiEvenStar chapter 28 . 5/11/2014
Oh my goodness. I found this right when I wasn't able to sleep and needed a good distraction. I get that Mary's first love in this story is Praji and that it's passionate. For some reason, I found myself loving the Luke and Mary pairing. I have to say your story charmed me right off the bat! I'm glad there's a sequel because i surely can't get enough! I read through it in ONE sitting which was a pure pleasure for me :) I can't wait to read the next story tomorrow.
Nargus chapter 18 . 1/18/2014
Err...have anyone told you that princess girl OC is really...I dunno...so fanatic to the verse it reach the end of the scale and looped back to the other side?
Pokemon Trainer Josiah chapter 1 . 8/28/2013
what
jaderook chapter 16 . 8/21/2013
I remember going to the first Twilight movie myself. I recall checking my phone constantly to see how much time had passed. Then, I remember looking directly at my husband and saying, 'Do you think they'd give us a refund? Or- maybe we could sneak into another movie.' It was painful to watch.

Anyway- I love your fic here. Your character reminds me of a female Tony Stark stuck in the Star Wars movies. It's awesome. Definitely keeping my interest.
Hoplite39 chapter 28 . 6/6/2013
And so it ends. Or at least the first part. A strange mix of dark and slapstick humour; philosophy and craziness, in which Mary fights her own contradictory fan fantasies.

The last chapter was good, wrapping up the first part and explaining what Mary has to do, even if we still don't know really why she got there.

The scene at home was a nice touch, as was the discussion with aurora.

Well onto ESB, part 2. So I'm totally up to date now. :)
Hoplite39 chapter 27 . 6/6/2013
An interesting insight of what victory for Thrawn or Vader might look like in a reservedly dark humorous way. You've got to love the idea of Empress Aurora though.
Hoplite39 chapter 25 . 6/6/2013
Aha! Mary actually experienced all that Chiss porn in her memories because she really wanted it. I knew it. And now I suspect it's Mary training Luke.
Hoplite39 chapter 24 . 6/6/2013
Oh, poor Farmboy. The nice guys never win in the game of love.

It's good Mary remembers who she is again. Actually, this story is kind of likeSomething About Mary with everyone trying to get with her.
Hoplite39 chapter 23 . 6/6/2013
Now we see the purpose of Hater's dastardly plot. Very well done. I didn't expect that.

Yoda didn't try his "I know Yoda trick." Nor try to steal her ration bar. Or is that why Mary is shooting him...?

Next time I pick my nose, I am going to remind myself that I am searching for Dagobah. In fact, I am rolling a Dagobah between my fingers now. I'm sure you didn't want to know that though.

Amazing that Mary still has the hots for a minor character who probably wouldn't even have a name if the movie had flopped.
Hoplite39 chapter 22 . 6/6/2013
So Vader is a porn fan. He obviously watches a lot of kriffing then.
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