Reviews for Shortening the Chain
Reader-anonymous-writer chapter 4 . 2/25/2013
how the hell was he supposed to look at his cake slices now? No, this is anything but permanent trauma and I will not give Light-kun the honor of having the last word.
Amused.
He disliked having to admit to himself that it was truly some intelligent plan he would be capable of, but he was innocent and it suddenly dawned on him that what he did was unnecessary.
If what you did was unnecessary, according to your current information, and you still did it then, and considered it then a truly intelligent plan... You are missing information which was known then.
I do not believe you want me to see you in a lewd way ... but I do enjoy your presence as my friend. Do not draw conclusions about me as if I was so desperate.
So Light is afraid of being rejected by L, and does not want to be seen as desperate.
The young female employee went florid and she stood back as the swan began its swim. "I wish we had cameras in the cave." She mumbled.
Amused.
Good day, good night, and good luck, L, Light, Raito, Ryuuzaki, Watari.
lanternheart chapter 4 . 11/30/2012
Some of these descriptions in this are damn hilarious. xD

...I ship this so fucking much...
Shizuki Kuruizaki chapter 4 . 11/29/2012
Ah, Light... you just had to suggest that, didn't you?

And the cameras just had to be turned back on, huh, L? Totally Watari's fault...

UPDATE SOON OR I WILL COME AND DESTROY YOU!

From Shizuki, with love.
GodofMischiefandChaos chapter 4 . 11/29/2012
_ SO HOT ! :D I love it. The writing sounds a bit forced though. Not semi natural. In the beginning it wasn't all that great. The writing was that of a elementary/junior high schooler. The grammar was okay, with only a few mistakes here and there, in the last couple chapters. I would suggest that you read it aloud, and in your head to fully correct any mistakes.
Lyric.Kiryu chapter 4 . 11/28/2012
omg! i'm addicted to this story! you must write more!
Goddess of the Multiverses chapter 4 . 11/27/2012
Cute, I really love this idea. I've been trying to get through all the chapters so I could finally tell you all that I loved about this story. Guess what? I love everything.
Preferably I like L being top, but this is your story so it is up to you :) update when you can, I'll be waiting like the stalkerish fangirl I am xD
chellyisback chapter 4 . 11/25/2012
OMG! *faint* :3 Light is just so sexy as seme!
theheartstourniquet chapter 3 . 11/24/2012
-dies of absolute happiness-
I love this so much -cries- thank you for posting it.
ValkyrieLawliet chapter 3 . 11/24/2012
OH MY GOD. PLEASE CONTINUE THIS EPICNESS! *fangirls and dies*
6D chapter 3 . 11/23/2012
I like this Fanfic. Another!
6D chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
This was a good fanfic. Another!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
Loved the story and the flow it had. I hope to see more.
Shizuki Kuruizaki chapter 3 . 11/22/2012
Ooh, yes, that's a good idea, Ryuuzaki! Misa doesn't deserve Light, you do!

And that TOTALLY has to do with the investigation, correct?

I wonder what Misa's going to do when she finds out what just happened between her (supposed) boyfriend and the detective...

UPDATE SOON OR I WILL COME AND DESTROY YOU!

From Shizuki, with love.
Shizuki Kuruizaki chapter 2 . 11/18/2012
And I wonder WHAT EXACTLY those FANCIFUL feelings for Light L has are...

Such a mystery... one worthy of L himself!

Yeah, right.

But anyway, this sounds great.

L x Light, right? It better be.

UPDATE SOON OR I WILL COME AND DESTROY YOU!

Sorry, you're going to have to get used to that.

Oh, and if you ever need help with ideas, feel free to PM me. I might have some ideas...

From Shizuki, with love.
minanomy chapter 2 . 11/9/2012
I loved it! I kept reading through it and I love your writing style, I can't wait till you write some more! Update soon!
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