Reviews for You Broke Through
Starwarrior87 chapter 7 . 12/20/2013
Normally I am not a fan of oc storys but I like this one you write well and it has a lot of daryl, hope for a new chapter soon
Anthro23 chapter 6 . 12/13/2013
It's really brilliant. I can't wait to read more :)
missy7293 chapter 6 . 12/5/2013
I Can't wait for an update. Please Please Please update soon!
missy7293 chapter 3 . 12/5/2013
Poor Daryl, stubborn to a fault.
missy7293 chapter 1 . 12/5/2013
perfect daryl characterization here. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
SexySelena666 chapter 5 . 11/19/2013
...Wait...Wait come back...I...I wanna know what's gonna happen next!
SexySelena666 chapter 4 . 11/4/2013
You can't just stop there! I wanna know what happens next!
Mione788 chapter 4 . 11/4/2013
Great chapter, poor sick Daryl!
SexySelena666 chapter 3 . 11/1/2013
No, wait! Come back! I don't wanna havta wait!
Mione788 chapter 3 . 11/1/2013
Love ur story so far! Hope u update soon def wanna see what is going to happen next
lilhanna chapter 3 . 11/1/2013
This is a really good concept.
Yes, I think if Daryl got sick, he would be in denial and keep pushing himself to keep going, and end up pushing himself too far. But right there in the beginning, when he was confronting every one, I think you made him too angry. Yeah, I can see him being moody, but not to that point.
Fiesty23 chapter 2 . 1/26/2013
Can't wait for the next update!
cahanse chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
Can't wait for more. Really enjoying your story.
Baztek chapter 2 . 11/19/2012
Interesting plot idea. You have a couple spelling errors but otherwise I look forward to reading this story.
Lady Impala chapter 1 . 11/8/2012
Great start!
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