Reviews for The Fire Shadow of Young Justice
seagate chapter 12 . 5/28
Why would tranquilsers take him out, when he has a healing factor, kyubi charkra that purges toxins and what not from his blood stream, it just doesn't make sense that he would be captured like that
beast of the 7 suns megidoh chapter 12 . 5/24
i just thought id give you food for thought so while having psimon do that to naruto is a good idea...it wouldn't necessarily work based on cannon info about chakra especially narutos sedatives or not psimons mental powers would only work for a very short period of time and thats with kurama out of the picture the bijus chakra would corrode any foreign entities naturally anyways this is a good point to either go true fanfiction style and have naruto be under psi's control or even better knowing how he feels have hime fake it then send a massive ammount of kuramas chakra into psimons brain...because we all know how kurama loves anything to do with mental control (cough madaras cheat code eyes cough) anyways looking forward to another chapter
Derin Leviathan chapter 1 . 5/19
Um I have a question... Where in the world did you get the idea that Naruto is weak... Even without kyuubi Naruto is strong and I don't understand how you can consider him weak. Other that that I'm like the story it's an interesting idea however calling Naruto weak is the only thing I have a problem with
ravens18 chapter 1 . 5/11
Please update before I go insane this story's awesome
unknown chapter 12 . 5/11
hurry with the next chapter
l3loodKnight chapter 12 . 5/4
Hope you update soon love your story.
J chapter 4 . 4/29
Hey read the story loving it so far but I have an idea like what if when the team found out he was kidnapped Cheshire broke her cover to help them and Connor actually tries to call naruto dad or something like that add some dramatic flair to it you know. Still totally up to you
Guest chapter 12 . 4/28
It's really good but needs more chapters.
MBlasterXD chapter 12 . 4/24
I cant wait for the next chapter!
Ravenclaw Slytherin chapter 12 . 4/3
I love your story! Update soon!
Gret chapter 12 . 3/28
Can't wait for the next chapter and hope the Naruto and Canary pairing is developed more
Jose19 chapter 10 . 3/27
I wonder what is Naruto so worried about his secret being revealed because if they are truly his friends they wouldn't just abandon him for his secrets.
Jose19 chapter 7 . 3/27
I hope he makes it out this terrible injury that he has suffered but Superboy needed to learn a harsh lesson about his mistakes.
Jose19 chapter 6 . 3/27
I think eventually whatever problem he is having he will not hide it for long against Batman because he is one person that rivals or surpasses Shikimaru from the world of Naruto in terms of intelligence and cunning.
Jose19 chapter 5 . 3/27
Naruto will not intimidate Batman, and he is not the type of person you want as your enemy because he is a very smart person with a lot of resources at his disposal.
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