|Reviews for Clockwork and a Teacup|
| KazamaLol chapter 4 . 11/16
| nate-king chapter 1 . 11/9
i look forward to seeing the changes! all the best, authorsan!
| AyakoA-chan chapter 2 . 10/26
I actually really like your story so far! I've always liked the 'canon-character-with-different-mind/soul' concept and Sakura is one of my favourites for it (like in To Kill A Bull, which really needs to be updated because I sense a lot of potential in that story). I'd just like to ask though whether the change in tense was deliberate or accidental, because in the prologue chapter you used present tense and then switched to past tense later.
| anthonym3 chapter 14 . 10/16
... aside from her adoption of her Sensor specialty and her bonding with Naruto and Sasuke (derailing cannon)... what has Sakura done in this story to prepare for the incoming threats against her and her friends?
Pein alone has to motivate insane fear in her... because his basic move rips Konoha and all the defenses she has lived around to the ground. What moves/special traits is she cultivating to try to prevent her living that catastrophe...
This Sakura is remarkably improved from Cannon Sakura... but I feel like she ought to shoot for a FAR larger level of power to remain relevant. Sakura, in Canon, was more of a bystander than Naruto and Sasuke...
Unless she can find some Gimmicks and really grow into a specialty... then she will likely not be able to make a real impact beyond supporting pre-existing characters while they do the heavy lifting...
I love how Sakura has such a high affinity for chakra sensing and scanning... why isn't she a ranged fighter? She is literally a Hyuuga with options here. If she is going to adopt a supporting role anyway, then Sniper!Sakura would be very interesting to read.
| Ellie chapter 34 . 9/22
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS story!Please continue!
| FutileNormalcy chapter 20 . 9/14
I really hope Sakura can develop some sort of relationship with Tobirama or at least have dialogue with each other. she needs a fellow sensor to talk to that can see her genius
| elouizamariaa chapter 3 . 8/30
kunimaru is so cute! haha ahh
| Howdoipickafandom chapter 34 . 8/26
Thanks for the update! Loved it. Stay safe
| Guest chapter 34 . 8/22
THANK YOU FOR THE CHAPTER IT WAS GREAT
| samgabbuddybali chapter 34 . 8/21
love this fic!
can't wait for the next update!
| Guest chapter 34 . 8/12
ajsdfhljkasfhljkhdff i didnt know you updated omg! i was so excited when I saw there was another chapter! thank you sm for taking the time to write this out! and please take care and take your time with writing!
| Guest chapter 34 . 8/6
I'm still here! I'm ladysalmon on ff net, but I'm logged out atm. I've been here for several years now, super taken with the whole spin you took on the concept! I'm actually planning on doing a re read sometime soon!
| nate-king chapter 15 . 8/8
I think I'm slowly understanding why the title is what it is...
| nate-king chapter 7 . 8/8
aaaaa, so good! I really love how you made your Sakura a dynamic (which I know, yeah, all characters main should have but still! development is nice to see) with her perspective and are changing her schtuff about ninjabusiness.
looking forward to the next chapters!
| nate-king chapter 4 . 8/8
Ive just finished a death note fanfic of a chilling sayu yagami and wish to read a story of an idle genius Sakura — thank you so much, author! advanced happy birthday!~