Nice surprise. Thank you for the update

Love this! Can't wait to see how she handles orochimaru

I love your story and I didn’t think I would but you just sucked me in

wait... isn't she already messing with the plot by NOT becoming a ninja?

glad they made it

bomb clones are devastating

kabuto always turns up at the worst times

things have become complicated

things are serious

things have gone pear shaped

that was awesome

I have a bad feeling about fuyuki

stressful

butterfly flaps it's wings

I'll stop here. While you added interesting twists to the story, it's just far too stressful for me to follow. Ideally, I should like Sakura as a character but.. she's too distant, she's too hesitant and she's too arrogant. It's a bit contradictory as well, her arrogance. While continuing to follow the script, she's also blinding herself to natural butterfly effects that'll happen anyways because she ISN'T SAKURA. The story is too changed up at this point that if she keeps trying to focus on "canon", it'll all blindside her and that's stressful for a reader.

There are so many positives about this fic that I'm torn to drop it. I love the Rookie 9s characterization and it feels like you really focused on them so it feels almost natural. I do want her to interact with Kakashi more since you know, he's her sensei? or even just her teammates! Their interactions always end up lacking for me but thats just because she's distant as a character. She isn't friendly, she's polite. An acquaintance you see from time to time that you never really think about unless they're currently in front of you and that's uncomfortable for me i guess because it ties to her not wanting to change the timeline. It's so confusing to see her want to change things but at the same time struggles to do so because of her hang ups and it all goes down hill.

But i guess I'm just not a fan of angst