random note, sakura would be a good player at 2 truths 1 lie, like the truths are sasuke has died and kakashi is their sensei, the lie would be something menial like her favorite dish wasn't her favorite

love the chalk bomb game aka hot potato but with a kunai and chalk bomb, it made them so nervous when kakashi poofed in lmao

wow, we try to have one happy thing and you just come over and bulldoze it. Sasuke's going to live, but whether he'll make it or remain comatose is crazy

please no

good nice

i wonder how high the wall was

i like the main character

me likey

lmao "I am bored" so real

HAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHA

Sasuke lives becuase the poison didn't get to his brain through his blood...
You know what else blood carries? Oxygen
You know what the brain needs? Oxygen

So if the poison - and this is stressing it's somehow a poison that ONLY effects the brain - didn't get there then oxygen didn't which would mean his brain was without oxygen for over 15 minutes which would make him FUCKING BRAINDEAD.

Fucking pathetic.

If you didn't want him dead then just have him knocked out instead of saying he's dead and then coming up with a steaming pile of absolute A grade bullshit to bring him back to life.

Actually just fucking pathetic.

You had Sasuke as not breathing and dead, then had her in a fight for OVER 15 MINUTES, then had her magically bring him back to life anyway.

There are actually no fucking stakes in this at all. Becuase if she can SOMEHOW bring back a dead body after that long...with no formal training...while being exhausted and hurt...while using a shadow clone for the FIRST TIME...then how the fuck are we expected to believe she could do it EVERY TIME.

Just don't have that fucking happen if you were then going to pull bullshit to have it NOT happen anyway.

Then add onto all that...you've arbitrarily given her a really stupid fucking handicap that somehow stops her using Jutsu...but only when plot demands it and even though it's so massively useful a thing have her just not bother to learn how to - just "meh, I can't do it first time, so why bother?"

You state that she can't use jutsu externally...and then having her create a clone even though, by FUCKING DEFINTION that is EXTERNALL because you're creating something outside the body.

And what the fuck is using medical chakra but USING CHAKRA EXTERNALLY.

You are literally arbitrarily handicapping her...for no reason...with loads of exceptions...with moronic reasoning...and then applying it wildly inconsistently.

Every chapter I wonder how this fic can get any WORSE and the somehow do it.

Like is the thought process "what fucking stupid thing can I write next?"

Please, the fic has a MC that does fuck all and can't be bothered to do anything, like fuck Sasuke is actually dead, that'd force the MC to actually DO something, and can't have that.

Sasuke will be fine and this MC will happily go back to standing in the background doing fuck all.

hahaha the award for Most Useless Main Character Ever Created goes to...*drum roll*...this fucking moron!

She had...so many...years extra to learn and practice and become as strong as possible...and just didn't even bother. Not for a single second.

She knew this was all coming and just...didn't bother training. And actively tried to still be a civilian at this point.

SHE HAS DONE LITERALLY NOTHING

NOTHING IS DIFFERENT

EVERYTHING IS EXACTLY THE SAME

WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU ON ABOUT

The MC, has done, FUCK ALL. Having Naruto and Sasuke act very very briefly out of character and it ONLY resulting in them having a shitty team name (that makes no difference to anything) is not. In anyway. "Sakura changing the world"

Fucking hell how is this MC so BAD. She's literally a grown ass adult letting actual fucking children fight and almost die right in fucking front of her because she refuses to do anything.

She's just a massively worse version of Neji, she thinks literally every moment is fucking scripted in advance and goes "I can just stand, here, doing nothing, because that's how it happened in canon and everything will be exactly the same" and it is fucking moronic as fuck.

She literally broke her arm saving Ino from falling off head first and she thinks she can just stand there doing fuck all as two 12 years old's fight a powerful lethal murderer because she can't be fucked to do anything.

At this point this is just like watching a trainwreck.

I'm morbidly curious at just how fucking bad this MC can be.

When the MC could literally not exist and absolutely NOTHING would change that is crazy.

It's actually crazy an author could waste so much time writing a fic where literally everything is the same as canon because their main character does literally nothing and just stands in the background watching.

This MC is literally just a spectator.

What's the point?

She has no personality or ambition or desire or initiative and takes no action and does not try, wish to, or intend to make any difference or involve herself in anything in any way.