Reviews for Where Was Donnie?
hmbrad1 chapter 1 . 10/14
I really enjoyed reading this short story; it intrigued me. You had a great usage of imagery along with the simile in the second to last line "...wore darkness like a horse wears a bridle..." I also liked the fact that you ended the story with a question to keep the readers thinking. Overall, great story and keep writing because you definitely have talent!
scarlett the seachild chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
I was sat staring at the screen for a few moments after I read this. Simple, subtle, absolutely beautiful. Because what else was there to do?