|Reviews for Bionicle Novel: Toa Bonds|
| AndromedaAI chapter 14 . 7/1
Yay! Another chapter!
I'm so loving what you're doing with this story, I'm eating it up like candy. You're doing such a great job and I look forward to reading more.
I love how Zephyr doesn't sound like a Mary-Sue - she's brave, but that's because she's learned to be brave, while also being scared out of her skull at the same time. This story is really original, even though there have been many humans-on-Mata-Nui stories. I haven't read a story where the humans came to our world, but then came as a group to the Bionicle world before. Keep up the good work!
| JubJub 0250 chapter 14 . 6/28
I'm glad to see that you've returned :) update soon :)
| Dragon of Yin and Yang chapter 13 . 6/27
Great chapter! It made-fixed my day.
| AllSpark Princess chapter 14 . 6/27
Oh man. I sure hope the Protodermis changes Zephyr instead of destroying her. I'm surprise to see Trent again. I didn't think he care about her at all. Glad to have you back. Please update this as soon as possible.
| Autobot Skyflame chapter 14 . 6/27
A new Toa
what will her element be... don't tell me... Darkness that just has to be it right
| Autobot Skyflame chapter 3 . 6/22
I hope the Rahkshi find and end the rest of the villagers that scapegoated Zephyr
| Artifex est hic chapter 15 . 6/1
Makuta because I think it'd be a growing experience, now that I myself am older more cynical and a little deader inside, for her.
Gali because... I think it'd be fitting. The first kind face to find her on the beach is the first kind face to meet her in the dark.
Makuta because he's deception itself... But is he really? Or is he just trying to protect his brother? Hmm...choices.
Tahu...because of their bond. A flame will always brighten the dark.
A simar answer for Takanuva. A light in the dark is always helpful to those who are lost.
That said I truly feel the most interesting development would come from Makuta. It could break her-I won't lie. Or it'll push her to get over this fear that's holding her down so hard. She's at a cusp, our little heroine. A mid life crisis of really steep proportions. I know from experiences with characters that sometimes...a really hard and severe push is needed to get them going once they're done crying. Or panting. Or having a heart attack. Or any other reaction to what is befalling them.
I don't know if you're still planning on pushing this through or not but I'm hopeful you'll find time and creative drive.
As an aside though, I'm also attaching an apology for something completely stupid I sent you regaurding this story earlier in...gods I don't even remember when I sent it. I just know I want to go back and slap the past me with a very hard reprimand.
That burning need to apologize outta the way: those are my votes with reasons. If we can't cast multiple votes then I ultimately choose Makuta because of the push. Relying on herself to find the balance she needs to rejoin in the Toa's unity. In their family.
| Autobot Skyflame chapter 15 . 5/9
Makuta Makuta and Makuta those are my three votes
| clay342 chapter 15 . 4/3
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| Dragon of Yin and Yang chapter 14 . 1/11
I'm also going to put votes in for a Toa and Gali. Please update. Think of it as a New Year gift.
| Cristyprime1 chapter 15 . 1/5
| SpiritTheSOLDER chapter 15 . 10/18/2014
I think the one of the Toa (Lewa or Tahu) should find Zephyr. or maybe Makuta...