|Reviews for The Blade of the Emperor|
| LD 1449 chapter 4 . 2/13
Well good things:
Well written, paced, overall an enjoyable read.
While you may have the aspects of Nasu-verse down, there are a lot of inconsistencies in terms of the 40k aspects especially Chaos.
Chaos warbands normally serve one of the 4 gods, its very rare that the warbands follow Chaos Undivided, seeing as how sneezing in the wrong way can offend one of the deities and Chaos undivided only works when all 4 are pleased enough with you. Seeing as how Nurgle can't stand Tzentch and Khorne can't stand Slaanesh and vice versa this can be very tricky.
Now while the Chaos warriors here have, mainly, been using stuff atributed to Tzeentch (Sorcery and mutants) their phisical descriptions look as though they're "blessed" by Nurgle (Pus Boils Tumors etc) Tzentch causes rapid mutation, more eyes, wings, limbs etc etc etc.
There are other nuances that follow this pattern.
Now as for Sakura being the Tyranid queen or whatever...
Ehhh...tyranids come from beyond the galactic edge, so unless she got a lot of frequent flier miles I don't see how exactly that worked out but meh.
Even though you may have aluded to something akin to no aliens before I suggest you add them, 40k fiction is ripe with humans and aliens offer a good change of pace every now and again.
| NewAgeOfPower chapter 4 . 2/11
As bad as this is, its the best 40k/Fate crossover. You still alive man?
| LeadAcid chapter 4 . 1/24
This is great, keep it up!
| BukkakeNoJutsu chapter 4 . 1/18
This is really fun!
| Tcuisine chapter 4 . 1/16
Dude it has been TWO YEARS! since you updated man when are you going to update. I can get you would be a little busy but come ON!
| I'MNOTCRAZY1 chapter 4 . 12/14/2013
"Prana nor od"? You mean "mana nor od".
Also of note, Gabriel Blessing is a tool who has completely shit on Shirou's personality, completely changing it without any actual character development to act as a reason for it. Don't venerate writers that can't even write in character correctly.
| I'MNOTCRAZY1 chapter 3 . 12/14/2013
Japanese doesn't really have syllables. If you count characters as syllables, which they basically are, then "senpai" has four.
| I'MNOTCRAZY1 chapter 2 . 12/14/2013
You mean "prana", not "mana". Mana is the potential magical energy of the surroundings. Prana is usable magical energy, after od, the potential magical energy of the body, has been converted by the magic circuits. Also, Techpriests don't "speak in binary". They speak in Lingua-technis, which sounds like a lot of static to anyone who isn't in the Mechanicus.
| narutofan020 chapter 4 . 11/30/2013
Awesome! Keep it up!
| Master Procrastinator chapter 4 . 11/18/2013
Most definitely interesting. Very curious to see how you explain the Sakura/Tyranid thing. (Especially since I was under the impression that the 'nids were of extragalactic origin.)
| Eljin1 chapter 4 . 11/8/2013
this is great work! im really looking forward to more.
i totally agree with the sakura/tyranid/zerg connection. would require a little bit of backstory work, but nothing needing too large a logic jump.
| Ethorin chapter 3 . 11/3/2013
oh my gods
| GeneralStargate chapter 3 . 10/31/2013
dude i really hope that you dont have shirou kill sakura. i think that he would be more likely to ally himself with sakura then the imperium because the imperium wants either the complete destrutcion of all non human life or its enslavement. i do think that regardless of shirous distortion he would ally himself with sakura because simply she is so far the only person from his time there and if your talking about the shirou from the heaven's feel arc of fate stay night then he would definitly choose her and i think he would prove to be a moral support for sakura which would solve the whole problem of sakura trying to eat everything in the universe. its quite possiable shirou's presence would return sakura to a mental state more like what she used to have mabye not completly. its more then likely she would be completly possive of him and completly disreagrd anything and everthing other then him, but i can see her being close to her original personilty while he is around. and also you do have to take into account that she still somewhat regards him as a sempai which means he would have some control over. not so much as he tells what to do but more she would be afraid to to anything that could get him mad or dissapionted at her. in the end it is your story but personally i would love it if you were to have them reunited and allies instead of him being part of the imperium, because basically everthing the imperium stand for and does are completly against shirou;s way.
| GeneralStargate chapter 4 . 10/29/2013
really really good you really have to get more out dude
| Dp11 chapter 4 . 10/29/2013
Nice story man even if I never played warhammer 40k. Hope to see more.