|Reviews for Guardian|
| N2 chapter 71 . 1/18
Please continue all the way up to super and it's end.
| Commander M2 chapter 3 . 12/18/2017
If this fanfic continues, here are 2 questions that I want to know:
1. In canon, Goku is scared of needles. Is it true that like his canon counterpart, Kakarot is scared of needles.
2. Due to the Pilaf Gang not encountering Kakarot in this fanfic because Goku wasn't in Dragon Ball and instead Yamcha and Gohan (who in this version are the arch-enemy of the Pilaf Gang, as stated in Chapter 2), what would have happened if Kakarot encountered the Pilaf Gang, if Kakarot would encounter the Pilaf Gang, would Yamcha tell the story of the Pilaf Gang and their goal to get the Dragon Balls and wished for world domination to Kakarot and Kakarot would take the Pilaf Gang much more seriously than canon and Kakarot would call out the Pilaf Gang that they are not serious villains and they are irresponsible at it.
| Commander M2 chapter 69 . 12/7/2017
If Goten appears in Guardian as the son of Bulma, rather than Chi-Chi, I think that Goten is speed because Gohan is the skill while Tanip is the strength. Alternatively, Goten could act as the balance where he got Gohan's skill and Tanip's strength. Guardian Goten might be slightly more mature than his canon counterpart.
| Commander M2 chapter 22 . 11/29/2017
So, this is what happens if Goku defeats and kills Frieza in a battle and takes his fight with Frieza seriously instead of sparing him. If Goku takes his fight with Frieza seriously and kill him, then Cooler might have appear instead and fight Goku in canon.
| Commander M2 chapter 32 . 11/24/2017
Arkham, I don't like the role of Inyon in Guardian. Instead, I like it better if she was given a major role in the fanfic and have her paired with Yamcha and have kids with her him so that half-saiyan hybrid will increase. Also, during Raditz and King Kai story of the saiyans, King Kai mentions that long before the Saiayns arrival at Planet Plant, the saiayns used to lived in a Planet called Planet Sadala but it was destroyed due to some unknown conflict. When Kakarot and Raditz discovers this, they decided to find this planet and terraform it after Raichi has been dealt with.
| Commander M2 chapter 2 . 11/24/2017
Since Goku wasn't in the Guardian version of Dragon Ball, I'm thinking that the protagonist of Dragon Ball was Yamcha and Grampa Gohan because both of them are constantly foiling the plans of Emperor Pilaf and his gang and their goals of taking over the world. Also, this version of Pilaf is a little more competent than canon. If Kakarot and the Pilaf gang were to interact, Kakarot tells them to stop taking over the world because they are incompetent and Yamcha tells Kakarot to watch over them if they caused trouble.
| Commander M2 chapter 67 . 11/24/2017
Arkham, since you have wrong spellings in your fanfic, is it true that you have Aspeager Syndrome, right. If you do, then I suggest that you go to Microsoft Word to help you with you spelling problem for you or asked your relative to help you spell the words.
| Commander M2 chapter 5 . 11/24/2017
Unknown Chapter: This chapter takes place after the Buu Saga of Guardian:
The Sins of the Saiyan Race - After the events of the Buu Saga, Raditz had finally got everything: Power, Super Saiyan and Chi-Chi. Things are going good for him, but, during Raditz dream, a mysterious figure and an unknown scientist (hinted to be Raichi) appeared before him had come to Earth and hunt down the last remaining saiyan for what they did to the Tuffles and Planet Plant, Raditz informs Kakarot and his family that he is coming and the sins of the Saiyan Race has come back haunt them of their crimes and he tells Kakarot and Inyon for the arrival of the Tuffle.
| Commander M2 chapter 66 . 11/24/2017
When Paragus mentioned that a low-class saiyan, like Kakarot, is unfit to rule the Galactic Parliament and he wanted to rule the galaxy along with his son, I'm thinking that Paragus and Broly are second class saiyans during the time of Planet Vegeta.
| Commander M2 chapter 65 . 11/19/2017
Arkham, since you stopped making this fanfic, I suggest that you add this trope on Guardian Tv Trope:
Composite Character: Raditz is considered to be the composite character of canon Gohan and canon Vegeta. Examples include Kakarot chose to spare Raditz instead of Vegeta because Kakarot had no interest in fighting. Second, Raditz had switched places with Vegeta and Kami had killed Vegeta by ripping his body into half, much like Piccolo killing Raditz with his Special Beam Cannon. Raditz had transform into Oozaru to fight Frieza, while Vegeta didn't. As for canon Gohan, Raditz had became the first Super Saiyan 2, like canon Gohan, and he takes canon Future Gohan's role as the protector of Earth from the Red Ribbon Army. Also, since Guardian Raditz is the composite character of canon Gohan and canon Vegeta, there is a possibility that Raditz future child should be a girl.
| Commander M2 chapter 25 . 11/19/2017
I like it better that the one who is responsible for starting the war was Dr. Raichi, not General Kunchupp.
| Commander M2 chapter 49 . 11/19/2017
It is implied through the dialogues and interaction of Kami and Raditz that Raditz is slowly becoming Kami's adopted son, this is seen when Kami, Raditz, and Kakarot team against Vegeta. This is seen again when Raditz (who was thought to be dead when Frieza shot Raditz with his Death Beam in the chest) and Kami are killed by Frieza in front of Kakarot eyes, causing Kakarot to become a Super Saiayn.
| Commander M2 chapter 71 . 11/19/2017
Had Guardian continued, the identity of the original character villain will be revealed. Also, Goten would have appeared as the torquiose haired son of Kakarot and Bulma and he would been identical to Kakarot and he would have appeared in the Majin Buu Saga. According to Arkham, it is stated that Dr. Raichi is going appear, but when and how will he appear in this fanfic is not stated, but he will appear after the Buu Saga. And if Kakarot finds out about the Tuffles and the origin of Planet Vegeta, both Raditz and King Kai are forced tell the origin of the Tuffles, Planet Plant and the Saiyans to Kakarot and both Raditz and King Kai are troubled. Also, Raditz suggested to use Super Saiyan God on Raichi and Hachiyak to prove to Raichi that not all Saiyans are evil, while Raditz use Super Saiyan 4 to fight Raichi. Also, have Bardock resurrected to help Raditz, Kami, and Kakarot and the Z Fighters Raichi and Bardock fused with Kami.
| Calypto chapter 8 . 11/13/2017
is this fic about goku or krillin? cause im really not interested in Nything with krillin as the main lead.
| Guest chapter 10 . 10/21/2017
Francamemte, en cada capítulo siento que le estas dando impulsos que no deberían de existir a los "terrícolas".
Osea, me estas diciendo que kakaroto entrena toda su puta vída en el mirador es casi igual de fuerte que los terrícolas, para posteriormente ser mucho más débil que los humanos, que solamente por los zankai ya debería estar a kilómetros de distancia de ellos?
Y luego está chaoz etc...
No se que pensaste al hacer esto, pero con cada capítulo estas mierdas se amplifican y simplemente no tienen puto sentido.