|Reviews for 5208 ft|
| p-porkypig chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
This is both funny and adorable. Don't ask me why it's funny, I don't know, I just - for some reason - found myself laughing at some sentences. You're by far my favourite NCIS author, you stay true to the characters. And your stories would look really good as real episodes. I would have loved NCIS even more then I do now (which is saying a lot!) if this scene was actually added into the episode. You're an amazing writer! Please write more :3
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
Just so you know: A mile is 5280 feet, not 5208.
| Anonymous033 chapter 1 . 11/15/2012
Well ... HI :D
Thank goodness he remembered to lock the door, haha. Federal agents seeing to a lavatory problem? I doubt the flight attendant bought that, but she must've decided that she didn't wanna know :P
You very good at semi-smut :D though I had to laugh at the turbulence thing, haha! Sounds characteristic of their relationship, alright. But of course Ziva doesn't care and she's still kissing him hungrily, and I doubt Tony thought much about anything after that :P
Turbulence after sex, though :(
Also, I'm decidedly OCD so the idea of a bra behind the toilet seat squicks me out A LOT, but it is kinda impressive that he managed to land a strap on the flush handle :D they did not shut the lid before they did it in there?! What if her bra had fallen in? OoO
Also this review is a little bit lacking because I'm not sure what to say about "slick and warm and sticky" :P
BUT YOU CHEATED WITH THE LAST LINE. Ish! I mean, you didn't really cheat, but you cheated, all the same! That's not part of the smut :P
The broken-up worked in this case, though. If you hadn't broken it up ... well, it'd be smut. Which I wouldn't mind; I'm just sayin'!
Okay, I'm done.
| xoxonessie chapter 1 . 11/9/2012
| ellie gilmore chapter 1 . 11/9/2012
Loved it! That would have made a pretty good M-rated story :) Loved it nonetheless, well written and enough for it being a os :D
| TheFoundersDaughter chapter 1 . 11/8/2012
Okay. Just. Yeah. I needed this.
Wow, this was sooooo good!
| Miss Suave chapter 1 . 11/8/2012
Sex on a plane? Kinky ;) lol loved it!
| BrightGrey chapter 1 . 11/8/2012
Love it. As usual!