Reviews for Perfect Memory
BluePard chapter 1 . 7/24/2002
Not looong enough. Though I don't think it'd really have to be that much longer if you just want a snippet, still, there's no real time for anything to develop. I like the way Gateau is written, he feels very in character and he's amusing me. I wonder if the previous reviewer thought it was Carrot at first because of the acid? XD The joints popping is a nice detail.
Clarus chapter 1 . 7/23/2002
Hmm-pretty and kinda surreal. I like the way you did the dialogue. Neat-o, darling!

Sorcerer Huntress chapter 1 . 7/23/2002
wait! Was that Carrot or Marron? It seemed like Marron, but then... Carrot... um... just ignore me...