Reviews for Alpha and Omega - A Lost memory
Guest chapter 4 . 9/7/2013
When are u gonna make the next chapter
Hermes Trismegistus chapter 4 . 12/27/2012
Some intriguing things happen this chapter.

Even as a pup, Can-do is temperamental and eager to get into a fight. I never expected him to be like that at such a young age – or to be so violent about it. It was interesting to see how the young Can-do acts, and how he was even willing to bite Luna to get out.

Humphrey is having great fun with Kate and Lilly. They all get along great and it is easy to see that they’re already close friends. Throwing a berry at Kate is so like Humphrey, and it was funny that he blamed it on Lilly, turning Kate’s playful fury on her own sister. Lilly lucked out by her father arriving just in time.

It should be interesting to see the three of them learn how to fish. Kate will probably be a natural but I wonder how Humphrey and Lilly are going to manage. That could turn out hilarious, just like anything Humphrey gets involved in tends to.

Humphrey's life is carefree, but things around him are getting more serious. I have a feeling his life is going to get darker from here.

- Gordon Pasha
Marimba Buddy chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
Sorry, dude. I forgot that Fanfiction doesn't always post links. It's . Also, remember what I said about the Stream2k setting as well as the advertisements that may appear. Hope you enjoy.
Marimba Buddy chapter 4 . 12/27/2012
Dude, I've got the link! It's . Make sure the setting on the left is set to Stream2k. A word of caution: I don't know if this will happen to you, but these wierd porn chat windows may come up. I don't wish to be held responsible for trouble, so please X them out immediately! This is the only site I could find that offered this full movie free. Anyway, enjoy!
Humphrey Loves Kate chapter 4 . 12/27/2012
It was beautiful as usual! I was touched when you had Humphrey whispering "Daddy..." to himself! *Sobs and wipes tears* It was really sad how he didn't even want to talk to his own mom about it. Poor Humphrey...

Humphrey Loves Kate
Crowwolf chapter 4 . 12/25/2012
I really like it dude! And also it was kinda funny to me at the ending. But anyways dude keep it up!
Humphrey Loves Kate chapter 3 . 12/6/2012
Not a boring chapter at all, my friend. It was very sweet and entertaining, actually. I liked how we got to see Humphrey, Lilly and Kate all together as little pups. Very very sweet! :-)

Humphrey Loves Kate
Marimba Buddy chapter 3 . 12/6/2012
Nice chapter. You really captured the mood of Humphrey might have felt in this situation. Good job!
Hermes Trismegistus chapter 3 . 12/6/2012
This was a cute chapter.

I liked how Humphrey was afraid he wouldn't make any friends. Humphrey is usually so self-confident that it's nice to see that there was a time when he wasn't. Definitely an interesting take on his character.

It was great to see Humphrey meet Kate for the first time. And it was perfect how he just freezes completely because Kate is the most beautiful wolf he's ever seen. I really like how they interact here with him being so shy and her trying to get him out of his shell.

Lilly, as always, is really cute and funny. The way she reacted to meeting a boy for the first time was hilarious. I can only imagine how she's going to adapt to being friends with Humphrey. Should be fun.

This has been a great story so far and I look forward to seeing what Humphrey and his new friends get up to next.

- Gordon Pasha
Humphrey Loves Kate chapter 2 . 11/27/2012
DUDE! Awesome! I'm just glad you're asking for my help... Honored, I guess.

I really did like how you had Humphrey's joking side even as a young puppy. I also loved how you interpreted the infamous short tempered Eve. That's always fun to see what different authors can make of her. LOL!

Keep it up!

Humphrey Loves Kate
Marimba Buddy chapter 2 . 11/27/2012
Wow. I like how everything is sad, yet Humphrey knows how to be innocently playful and lighten the mood. The entire story up to there put an eerie feeling into my mind, but now I can't help but laugh on the inside. This is certainly an interesting story!
Hermes Trismegistus chapter 2 . 11/27/2012
Another strong chapter!

Nice to see a more sensitive side to Winston and Eve. Showing how guilty Winston feels is a good touch. And Eve is crazy as always - always fun to see that.

There's trouble in the pack. Tension and danger are rising. I wonder how this is going to play out. (Not good for the Western Pack, I'm sure.)

Humphrey is already a very good practical joker. It's nice to see that he already had the hang of it at a young age. This story has really good characterization of the young Humphrey.

I look forward to seeing what happens next.

- Gordon Pasha
Dead Wolf Walking chapter 2 . 11/27/2012
Bravo!
Even you're a beginer, you can write-down one BRILIANT-MAGNIFICENT-SMASHING story! (Not really, cause ya said that Humphrey loves Kate helping ya, so he also got the appreciation)
Keep it up lads!
TimberWolfPup chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
Good & Sad
Crowwolf chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
Keep it going.
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