Reviews for The Life Aquatic
Narcys-crazydaisy chapter 2 . 11/10/2012
loved the chapter.
sassy41 chapter 3 . 11/10/2012
ahhh poor charlie. he is the father and it seems he wants more for his daughter than wasting her time looking after him. well he is getting better but can there be another reason she sticks around. maybe a green eyed father, hmmmm
looking forward to more
Courtney37 chapter 3 . 11/10/2012
Ooh arguing with Charlie, not good. But at least Bella won't have to worry about him, even tho we all know she will. Lol! Can't wait to read more. Thanks again. Bye for now
cusic1981 chapter 3 . 11/10/2012
Like it
maymay74 chapter 3 . 11/10/2012
poor Charlie, but I think it's better he goes back to work , to himself busy.
jane-with-a-y chapter 3 . 11/10/2012
Fathers have such a way for knowin... Three chapters in and I already like this Charlie!

I can't wait to hear Edward's backstory...the suspense is killin me (in a good way, natch!)

I was always a fish and I must say, both of my boys were too. I didi the baby and me class with my rascals and they never wanted to get out of the pool. Later on both of them did swim team and one even became a lifeguard. He is now in charge of the aquatic program for the Boy Scouts!
Risbee chapter 3 . 11/10/2012
I love Charlie :)
spunkmehard chapter 3 . 11/10/2012
Bella tends to take the backseat and put others needs first. I'm glad Charlie is recognizing this and pushing her to do something for herself. Have fun ogling CPW, just wish I could join you!
MrsAuburnCullen chapter 3 . 11/10/2012
Thanks for the update!
More Edward in swim trunks please! ;)
Edward's spouse chapter 3 . 11/10/2012
excellent. waiting for more.
tff000 chapter 3 . 11/10/2012
maggiejoma chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
nice start...:)
casey-leigh chapter 2 . 11/10/2012
Can't wait to see where it goes
Danni-Sherlockian-Ireland chapter 2 . 11/10/2012
Ahhhhh I love this story!

I think it is sooo cute!

Fantastic Writing and Updates!

Update Soon?

Much love x
Bunch2009 chapter 2 . 11/9/2012
He is such a great dad..
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