Reviews for Pandora's Finest
Iyearnforaplotadvancement chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
In reply to Terrorbyte TC,
Very sorry about the grammar mistakes, i have to learn to be more careful when typing.
I see what you mean on the errors. I'll get right on it.
Again really sorry. Thanks for pointing that out.
Terrorbyt3 chapter 2 . 11/12/2012
Well, same person has the first two reviews, but hey, whatever right? Another good chapter, but I'm noticing grammatical errors and missing words. Make sure you re-read you work before posting it. I find the spell checker in the document manager to be very helpful.
Keep it up.
Terrorbyt3 chapter 1 . 11/9/2012
I'm liking it. Nice to see someone go back to the original, in the midst of all the new stuff. no trouble with the accent, as I know that particular sequence in the game like the back of my hand. Worry more about layout mistakes. I only saw one, but it was pretty obvious and really shouldn't have been there.
Keep it up, I'm looking forward to seeing where you take it.