|Reviews for Californian|
| lovekyman chapter 7 . 6/9/2013
man, this needs alot more reviews "come on people this is a really good story!"...you are incredible, plus this is your first story right? you got to continue don't let nothing bring you down cuz your talented, if i could right as good as you i'd be soooo happy. you're really great keep writing want to know what'll happen! please continue! :D this is a really good story! :D
| Cori chapter 6 . 11/29/2012
Great chapter! Loved the length and detail. Keep going!
| Cori the Freak-of-nature chapter 4 . 11/27/2012
Also, maybe you could extend the chapters a bit; make them a bit longer.