|Reviews for Finally Visible|
| Guest chapter 15 . 9/4
You should've made Hiccup immortal! I got so depressed reading this!;( GREAT writing though. Can you PLEASE write another with Hiccup and Jack in something like Heaven? PLEASE NO! THIS CAN'T END LIKE THIS!
| Guest chapter 15 . 7/28
I go on the internet looking for a quick Hijack love story and I find a peace of literature that grows in its ability to reach you and in the end gives you and extesistal crisis, very very very well done!
| Taki14 chapter 15 . 7/18
Why? Why was this so good and that ending? I'm crying so hard, I'm getting a headache. Like. Holy Shit. If I'm to be honest, I have never seen Rise of the Guardians, but I know of Jack Frost, and I love How to Train Your Dragon, I watched it millions of timesI babysat 6 kids that always wanted to watch a movie for down time and guess what movie was always put in? Yup. HTTYD) but oh my days, this emotionally, well-done fanfic of the two worlds was done beautifully. Though, I never liked Astrid anyways, and totally pegged Hiccup as gay anyway xD
| blue wolf 121 chapter 15 . 6/6
I love the story sad about the ending
| Andrea Criss York chapter 5 . 5/7
i love jack and hiccup so much they are the cuttest
| Andrea Criss York chapter 6 . 5/7
loving the fic
| Andrea Criss York chapter 7 . 5/7
l hate pich he is a creeper
| Andrea Criss York chapter 1 . 5/7
| Chad.DBD chapter 1 . 4/29
I think it's an amazing story line! A little rough around the edges, endless potential!
| thomasclifftsi chapter 15 . 3/21
Why am I crying crazily right now. Ugh this is such an amazing fanfiction .ugh but so sad
| SimiParthenopaus chapter 15 . 2/9
This was a great story and I cried at the end...
It was just so great... Please continue to be awesome...
| Mareli chapter 15 . 1/29
I cried so hard... oh wow the feels...
| hijack forever chapter 15 . 1/29
Omg! This ending had me crying for hours and hours. I love this fanfic, but its just so sad!
| Guest chapter 15 . 1/10
The whole time reading the last chapter (after I figured out what was going to happen) I was telling myself no that won't happen... No it can't... And as I read the last few sentences I just started bawling. Literally.
THIS WAS AN AMAZING STORY THO!
| Guest chapter 15 . 12/27/2015
What an amazing story, I am a young gay 14 year old and I love to read. There are no gay books out there and I love magic; and Jack Frost. This story was to heart touching and magical and has so much suspense. The end nearly made me cry it was so sad but necessary. I thought the moon was going to make jack immortal though. Surprise! He didn't.
Please keep making more stories, this was 10/10 and you have just inspired me to start writing again.