|Reviews for At Long Last|
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/31/2016
That was a really good alternate ending! Potentially better than the actual one! Nice work!
| Rebeccaseal chapter 1 . 1/18/2016
Go Kirito! Chop him into pieces, burn the pieces in acid, and incinerate what's left!
| 3 3 3 chapter 1 . 10/5/2015
this story literally made me cry. it was so beautiful i wish this was the ending to the first season instead of the one they had. but i con is that i wish kirito hurt sugou more but in the end this is the best fanfic i have ever read :) :) :)
| PrincessArien chapter 1 . 8/28/2015
You know, I'm actually surprised that Sugou *didn't* try to get into the hospital and do something to Asuna...what he said when Kirito got there, it sounded like he'd been there for at least a little while before Kirito arrived. As out for revenge as he'd be, I would have thought that Sugou would have gone after Asuna instead, or waited inside her room to try and kill Kirito *in front* of her before doing whatever he wanted to her...
In any case, well-written little piece of almost dark and depressing material. I wasn't sure at first whether you were going to go for a happy ending, or if you were actually going to kill Asuna...you definitely had me worried and on the edge of my seat once the action got going. Good job.
| Delta Marauder chapter 1 . 1/9/2015
He should've thrown the b*tch out of the window. But well done for only four thousand words it was surprisingly suspenseful. Anyways keep up the good work. :D
| furrballnerd chapter 1 . 9/11/2014
A little disappointed by the Deus Ex Machina but a great story nonetheless. You wrote it well and had great ideas, kudos
| AdamTobiasGrayson chapter 1 . 8/1/2014
gahhhhh I have Sugou! it was terrible watching that last episode and the scene just went on and on just ahhh. WHYYYYYY.
| Satiah chapter 1 . 6/13/2014
What a great alternate ending, well-played and well-crafted. I was captivated with the way you kept hold of all three characters, especially Kazuto in the midst of that final, emotional battle. I feared he would fly off the deep end in his rage, pummeling Sugou to a smear on the floor, but you reigned him in, kept him true to himself. He's not a killer - just a hopeless romantic of a hero.
I love your SAO work very much. It's more like diving straight into canon than it is reading a fanfiction. I've also been working through Moments, and it's just so amazing how well you write for this series. You're incredible. :)
| Jingyee1511 chapter 1 . 3/22/2014
Wonderful story! the emotional elements were beautifully done, good work! It was so realistic and captivating. Nice work!
| Kuro-Hoharu chapter 1 . 2/12/2014
Different and good!
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/1/2014
Wish they used that one for the show
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/12/2014
Sugou got what he deserved
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/23/2013
Sugou should really die! I will never forgive him
| AnimeObsessionFantasy chapter 1 . 5/8/2013
Nice alternative sequence of events I'm happy that nothing happened to Asuna and Kirito still beat the crap out of Sugou :)
But for a second, I thought Asuna died, because that evil sicko had his hands around her neck and her words... _!
| PopPunkRocker4321 chapter 1 . 4/27/2013
Nice AU! Good details, characterization, and is very creative. I like it.