Reviews for The Ultimate Revenge
WENN9366 chapter 1 . 12/6/2012
Great writing and you've got both Gus' and Hector's demeanors down pat...and that's saying a lot since one of them can only sit there with a bell and a bad expression. I admit, I did expect it to be rats gnawing at Sancho's head or something in the bag though. ;)
WishfulWriting chapter 1 . 11/16/2012
I actually did look up the Bengal Cat. Beautiful animal! And fits into the scene very well. Your portrayal of Gus is excellent. Though silent, there is a lot that goes on with Hector's eyes and expressions and you've captured that well also. In the ocean of Jesse/Walt fics, it's nice to see a focus on some other vital characters from the show.