|Reviews for Madness Combat: Hank's Legacy|
| Kagami 13 chapter 1 . 3/21
That was an awesome beginning to the next arc/season. I know that it has been a really REALLY long time since I left a review and I hope you will excuse me, after all life has been extremely hectic and busy for me but I'm still loving this story. The last arc was amazing, it introduced us to so many intreresting new characters and plot points and was really enjoyable up until the very end and speaking of the ending it was crazy especially that plot twist with Ryder and 574 defecting. All in all I can't wait to see how this next arc will go down. UPDATE SOON!
| danreaper chapter 34 . 3/12
Great start to the series. I love the fact that this started off as a scene with Nikolai. Because we knew he was there, just never knew who he was. I like him as a character.
| Spirit9871 chapter 9 . 3/9
To the Guest review in Chapter 9 (I hate to be reviewing my own story like this, but at the moment, there's really no other way to reply to your comment; please use an actual account next time if you would like a direct reply back to your reviews):
I apologize if you felt that the "ass-beating" in Chapter 9 was seemingly cliche or uninteresting. I want you to keep in mind, however, that firstly, these chapters were written two years ago by me, where my writing abilities were not up to par with my abilities now.
Secondly, I ask of you to simply read on and see how all these events that may seem cliche to you now tie up later on in the future. Everything in this story happens for a reason, and you will see why in due time.
Thirdly (and I hate to break it to you), "ass-beatings" are actually quite frequent in this fanfic's future chapters. This is Madness Combat after all, and if nobody's going to die from these sorts of fights, someone is going to have to have their ass kicked. But if that does indeed upset you, then I hate to say there's not much I can do of it.
Ultimately, if this turns you off from this story, I at least thank you for making it this far. Nine chapters is better than none, and your feedback is appreciated. If you have anymore opinions you would like to share in reviews, then I highly recommend making an account where we can go more indepth with certain opinions you have on the fanfic in a private message chain.
| Guest chapter 9 . 3/9
wtf this chapter was pretty cliché I mean really I read tons of things were the protagonist beatin like a damn mutt but come on why here least have him do something other than take a ass beating!
| Guest chapter 34 . 3/8
Keep going love the work I would love to see hank meeting Sanford and Deimos for the first time.
| lolrus555 chapter 34 . 3/8
Y'know, when I first saw Nikolai's kill-count, my first thought was immediately: "bitch please! Hank's gonna have 500 kills by the end of this!" Also, sorry for my shit writing in the last review, I'm writing this from a phone, so it's not easy to accurately type.
| deathdefier243 chapter 34 . 3/7
I just don't know
I'm just not feeling it anymore
This is a good story
No doubt about
I just suddenly lost interest
So good luck and stay strong
Oh and thanks for allowing me to use a crossover of your story
| lolrus555 chapter 33 . 3/5
Okay, so a few things and questions. First off, this has been an amazing story, I've really been engaged in it with each chapter, and to say the least, I'm looking forward to season 3 with bated breath.
second, will Hank still be alone in MC 1-7? I like the OCs l, but part of Madness combat's appeal wadwas this badass main character taking on an entire building full of soldiers. If you want my advice, then with the exception of the sheriff episodes, you should detail things through another characters POV going through the slaughter Hank created.
third, I really hope you show the Madness squadron's reactions to Hank's condition in 6, i think it'd be interesting.
Finally, is there any way I csn help out with this forum you have? I'm new to this, but I want to help make the Madness archive more popular.
| lolrus555 chapter 2 . 3/2
Man, this is an amazing story so far! Although I really hope that as the story progresses and when Hank becomes an adult, I hope he doesn't become some grizzled, deformed dude from the explosion in MC4.
| classykazmiller25 chapter 34 . 2/15
| SirPolarBear chapter 30 . 1/5
Oh my gosh, thank you for recommending my fic! I think I'll have to rewrite/finish that one soon. Reading this is getting me inspired again.
The repetition of "happy little" was super creepy. Everything was really intense, and the black fire...now that's bad.
As for keeping your audience, shorter and concise chapters are key. It's easier to read and catch up with. However, all the detail and intensify you include is fantastic, so organize it however you like!
| SirPolarBear chapter 29 . 1/5
HELLO FRIEND I'M JUST CATCHING UP MONTHS LATER DON'T MIND ME
Spirit, this chapter was DAMN good. The pacing was fantastic, the transitions were smooth, and I was on the edge of my seat throughout the entire thing.
I'm incredibly impressed by the medical and scientific research that has gone into this story and this chapter specifically. I'm worried about 574, though...
| danreaper chapter 33 . 12/31/2014
CANT WAIT FOR MORE!
| danreaper chapter 29 . 12/30/2014
Love the fact that not everyone is a bad ass but Corey. Fuck yeah.
| danreaper chapter 8 . 12/25/2014
Fuck this chapter made me. Oemg I DONT EVERN KNOW!