|Reviews for Madness Combat: Hank's Legacy|
| Kagami chapter 1 . 2/15
Most excellent! Thanks for informing us Rock monster much appreciated!
| RockMonster6 chapter 1 . 2/11
Hey guys he really isnt dead i PMed him hes updating soon
| Spirit9871 chapter 24 . 1/19
Hey you guys, I'm really sorry for leaving you all in the dark for so long. School has become extremely hectic, since we've got midterms and all that up our asses right now. Also, I've been struggling with my writing as well. But don't worry; I didn't forget about my fanfiction. Never did and never will. I'm still even planning out future chapters after this fanfiction as well. But that's not the main point.
For those of you wondering about Chapter 25, I've just recently managed to really get back on it. Like I said, I've just been bombarded with work, so things are hard to deal with right now. As of now, it's currently 7,000 words long, and counting.
In addition, Chapter 25 is supposed to be BIG. It may even possibly break the 14,000-word record we set a few chapters back. Plus, it's a major point in the story, so I'm really cautious as to how I plan to execute it.
Again, I'm really sorry for keeping you all waiting like this. I suppose you all also deserve to hear to have a Happy New Year as well; thought I could get this next chapter out by then and say it, but I guess that didn't work out.
Still alive and writing:
P.S. Kagami, thanks for worrying about my well-being. Just hope you all know that I'm still going to give you all the story you deserve and more. :)
| Kagami chapter 24 . 1/18
Hey it's been a long time since you updated on any of your stories, is everything alright? Because this doesn't really seem like you so I was just curious as to what's going and I don't mean to sound impatient but I was just wondering
| Kagami chapter 24 . 12/21/2013
Hey it's me again and I come here with good news! Krinkels has releasedyet another screenshot from madness combat 11 and it is really awesome! You really have to see it! Well thats all I had to say, oh and UPDATE SOON!
| classykazmiller25 chapter 1 . 12/8/2013
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| Cowbow50 chapter 24 . 11/30/2013
Haha, this was awesome!
When Adrian got hank, my heart actually dropped... "What? AW COME ON!"
But that twist got me good ;)
| Alias.Maxima chapter 1 . 11/24/2013
Every day, I switch back to this tab, slap down a F5, and hope there's an update, which is to say, I follow these writings with pointed interest. When a new chapter finally comes out, well, I basically ignore all else and focus on reading the new chapter. Again. And again. Enough to build up even more hype for the next chapter. I never regretted that day I opened up that link on Madness Day 2013 that led me to this page.
I've tried to sate my impatience for new chapters with my own paltry efforts at writing. While I mentally nitpick at nonexistent word choice errors and cliches in Hank's Legacy, I also admit that whatever shit I write pales in comparison. Ah yes, the infamous and all-too-common plight of the dysgraphic critic.
Speaking of criticism, I am the douchebag who never dishes out a grade higher than a C in APLAC peer editing. Despite my hypercritical nature, I still give your writings 9/10 (for now). As for story suggestions, I'll just let you decide what you want. Keep up the good work, and remember: your loyal legion of fans are anxiously waiting, their fingers on the refresh button.
| Just a normal reader chapter 24 . 10/23/2013
oooh..baby..I snuck up and snatch my Smartphone..I hope there's another ARC story or even side story..Man i'm proud of you..Fuck my cell..Its battery almost gone..You're ARE F**king Awsome yall!
| Former Emo chapter 24 . 10/21/2013
Dude, I need to clear something up.
The Former Emo post that you got for chapter 23, that wasn't actually me, I had a party at my house, an old buddy of mine was drunk, plus he knew the information about my accounts and backstories to my various characters, He decided that my alias, 'Former Emo', needed to be more, in lack of a better word...assertive. He got on the website, checked the information needed, and then posted that comment, sorry about the mix up, but he DID get the character information right, including the guns I'd prefer Sebastian have, and speaking of Sebastian, I decided on two things about the character idea: that his name has changed to Eon, and that he has an alternate personality disorder, and his 4 different personalities that switch at random times are listed as follows (PS the & symbol is used to signify which parts of personality go with which): #1: Silent & Brave, #2: Swedish & Neutral, #3: Tactical & Calm, and #4: Mysterious & Understanding. I hope you think that these idea changes could work and will accept them, and instead of dying by Tricky's hand, why not have Seba-I mean Eon, tortured by the Sheriff's minions, who are trying to force him to tell them where the Anti A.A.H.W, and eventually the Sheriff could give up and kill him execution style, with Eon not telling them anything and saying to The Sheriff; "You never know till you know, and let that make you think about the innocents that have died by your hand, one way or another..."
| Kagami chapter 24 . 10/20/2013
WOW JUST WOW...This chapter was amazingly awesome and before I start my review there is something I would like to say to you and Sacrom. You guys sure have grown alot Since this fanfic started and I think that is a great thing and I will dare say that is one one of my favorite fanfics ever...of all time. And I too see more awesomeness from you guys in the future. And Spirit you have really grown alot as a writer since final salvation, and I am glad I happened to find final salvation and decided to follow it. So what I'm saying is to keep up the awesome work guys! Ok now to the actual review lol
So the long awaited match between the Madness Combat and he Black Snake squadrons is finally over and it lived up to the hype. I really liked the scene with Eli and Hina because it showed more interaction and character development, the only thing though is seemed a little out of character but you probably had your reason for doing that so I will just have to wait and see. Also I am happy to know that they will have their time to shine (-). The part with 574 and Grayson was very well done and I can understand why Grayson did what he did at it made me like and understand the character more, the fight was also badass lol. I also liked the scene with shane But the highlight of the chapter was the final battle between Aiden and Hank and Aaron. That part really showed the desperation to win and that the Madness Combat squadron could not afford to lose. It also set a conclusion between the Aiden and Aaron situation as well. The best part to that fight though was the part where Hank sacrificed himself so that Aaron could win the match was epic especially that quote "Its not suicide it sacrifice!" was pure win. All in all it was an amazing chapter and UPDATE SOON!
PS: I'M THE 100th REVIEW HELL YEAH!
PSS: Congrats on 100 reviews
| L33T chapter 24 . 10/20/2013
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| GOD chapter 24 . 10/20/2013
This chapter was godly that is all
| Madness lover chapter 24 . 10/20/2013
NOW THAT WAS A CHAPTER! THE ACTION WAS AWESOME AND DAT PLOT KEEP DOING WHAT YOUR DOING MAN BECAUSE IT IS GREAT!
| SirPolarBear chapter 24 . 10/19/2013
First off, congratulations! Those are seriously some amazing achievements, and you should be incredibly proud of yourself!
Okay, now to get to this chapter review because holy shit dude. It was intense from start to finish, and you fit in a ton of plot development as well. I LOVED the 300 quotes, and I'm still giggling over just how perfectly they fit.
I also feel like Hank really grew in this chapter, especially at the very end of the match. Damn. That was a shining moment if character development right there and it really sets the stage for his future missions.
Okay, and the scenes between 574 and Grayson. Those were just really well written, I can't even begin to tell you. Those were some of my favorite parts.
Okay, I'm gonna wrap this up so it's not too insanely long, but I seriously loved this chapter! It was just super intense and exciting, and it had some great character development, too. Great work, Spirit! I can't wait to read the next chapter!