natipanfichi chapter 7 . 7/23/2016
Love it
natipanfichi chapter 6 . 7/23/2016
This a good story
natipanfichi chapter 5 . 7/23/2016
Jaja pan
natipanfichi chapter 2 . 7/23/2016
Kate Aleu chapter 7 . 7/25/2013
I loved your last chapter Jonny so sad you had to end it so soon but that's okay you've worked very hard on this story and I enjoyed every Chapter :) ... Love yah Jonny
Villains' Bad Girl chapter 7 . 7/25/2013
i'll keep reading Aleu's fic! sad to see this fic end
mysterionaleu chapter 6 . 5/26/2013
the chapter is just fine very interesting on how captain hooks hand got chopped off can't wait to read the next chapter keep writing
Villains' Bad Girl chapter 6 . 5/25/2013
i never understood why Peter Pan used a little knife. oh have you seen the 2003 live-action Peter Pan? Captain Hook's hook wasn't sewed on
Kate chapter 5 . 4/15/2013
I really enjoyed this story, its really good and can't wait to read Chapter 6, great job on it
Villains' Bad Girl chapter 5 . 4/13/2013
lol Smee always annoyed me. ooh so now they meet Peter Pan! now it's getting interesting
RaviFennec chapter 4 . 4/9/2013
Now, this is one interesting fic. I just love how you portrait the pirates' lives. Mr. Smee made no sense before, but now he does. Please keep up the amazing work! :)
jamie march chapter 4 . 3/19/2013
Great story, it kept me on my toes.. you can tell the author really loves his characters.. cant wait for more chapters.
Villains' Bad Girl chapter 4 . 3/7/2013
ooh. what adventures await Smee and Hook?
jamie marchesano chapter 3 . 2/11/2013
Great story as always.. kept me on the edge of my seat.. when is chapter 4 comming out..
Kate Aleu chapter 3 . 2/9/2013
As a fan of Peter Pan I loved this chapter it was very interesting, My favorite part is Captain Hooks point of view, Over all a very good story and i can't wait to read more

Kate Aleu
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