Reviews for Close Personal Protection
Guest chapter 1 . 5/22/2016
I love mella
Guest chapter 1 . 7/13/2015
Love everything you wrote he the way you worded it fave part was the whole paragraph of that was when it hit her all the way to hidden feeling like the whole thing and Michael would have said that they loved each other at first sight lots and lots and lots of chapters never delete this I bet she hasn't even grieved so when she sees him she will be angry and then hug him and she will be like I thought I lost my best friend and he would be like me to and they say they never stopped thinking about each other and they finally admit they can't live without each other and they love each other
Guest chapter 1 . 7/13/2015
Did she say she loved him cause you wrote she did but when it was to late
Guest chapter 1 . 7/13/2015
Also if she gets angry he she would be like well I lost my best friend and he would be like I did to or something
Guest chapter 1 . 7/13/2015
Never ever delete this lots of chapters I can see her getting angry at him for lying but they were inlove with each other I bet he heard what she said before life support was off and I bet they thought about each other everyday and they will finally admit they can't live without each other
Helen chapter 1 . 11/21/2012
I need this because of reasons.
Xxletgoxx chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
I'm in love with this I can't wait to see more. Keep it up
ElyCarter89 chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
Beautiful :)
Guest chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
This was great. I have not seen the full show before, so this let me get a very good back story into what was happening. It also let me see the depth of her feelings for him and the complexity that they were to each other. I could almost see her sitting there looking around the room. Very vivid! Great opening to the story. :)
K chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
capostrophe chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
Huzzah for this awesome story my dear! It truly is a splendiferous idea for a fic and you have written a very brilliant prologue here.