Reviews for the love of a mother
SassyRaydorGirl chapter 6 . 11/19/2012
A mother's love for sure. Omg I love this so much xx
jessieleigh96 chapter 5 . 11/16/2012
Omg i hope he doesnt kill her...please dont let him kill her! Oh whats he going to do? Update soon please!
SassyRaydorGirl chapter 5 . 11/15/2012
Nooooooo. Cliffhanger, you bugger lol. Omg intense xx
Guest chapter 4 . 11/10/2012
This is great! Can't wait to read what happens next!
SassyRaydorGirl chapter 4 . 11/11/2012
Oooh this is getting so intense. Can't believe Nick isn't being supportive, bad Nicky xx
jessieleigh96 chapter 4 . 11/10/2012
So they know its not her? Thats great! Maybe now they will all be safe and paul will be found...
jessieleigh96 chapter 3 . 11/10/2012
Oh no! I hope someone does something...
SassyRaydorGirl chapter 3 . 11/10/2012
That poor girl. Stuck between a rock and a hard place. You update so quickly. Not that I'm complaining :)
SassyRaydorGirl chapter 2 . 11/10/2012
Typical men. Never want to face the fact there could be something wrong. Thank god for Miriam. Feel so sorry for Amelia ( love that name by the way) my favourite Actress Amelia Bullmore. Little Fangirling moment there. Sorry :)
accnt no longer in use chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
Ooooh, this sounds like it's going to be exciting :P

I really like how you've set the pace already, in the space of a few words. Like, it's given us enough information to know that the rest of the story isn't going to be smooth-sailing, but not enough to reveal any clues of how the situation's going to pan out.

I feel quite sorry for Amelia (I'm assuming she's Amelia haha!) in this, because she might have made one of the biggest mistakes by agreeing to meet that client. I think the way you described the deaths was quite clever, 'cause already we can tell that it wasn't a complete accident but not something that can easily be proved as murder either.

My review is absolutely rubbish, I know, because I'm in a rush and trying to get it down as quick as possible :P I really like this - it's mysterious and I'm looking forward to seeing how the events fold out in the future. Can already tell that Amelia might not though!

If it's possible - I'll go onto guest and write a better review in a little while haha, because this box of rambling just doesn't do it justice :P

I love you loads!xxxxx
jessieleigh96 chapter 2 . 11/10/2012
Aww I bet her mums so worried! You dont just burst into tears for no reason, so she would know something was wrong. I hope amelia tells her...
SassyRaydorGirl chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
Eeek I like very much. Miriam never has it easy does she xx
jessieleigh96 chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
Wow loving this so far! I hope she and the three people will be okay...