|Reviews for Coming Undone|
| CrimeShowWatcher13 chapter 11 . 12/30/2013
Please continue writing these AU stories. I really enjoyed it and loved how it ended, it leaves it open for the rest of the series to come in and I can't wait to see the alpha pack take in what's going on in Beacon Hills.
| Trust Me I'm Psychic chapter 11 . 11/8/2013
I love this story. Not only did you create a great story, but I think you wrote it wonderfully. And I love the characterizations of all the characters, too!
| Guest chapter 11 . 10/9/2013
Awsome fanfic that you made here it was one that I enjoyed a lot ( pics don't have meaning whatsoever, just made for fun kekekeke)
| TurtleNamedPeanu chapter 11 . 10/9/2013
Ohhhhhmmmmgeeeee! I can't believe that I hadn't found this story sooner! I immensely enjoyed reading this story and found the idea of Stiles being the Alpha totally awesome!
| gosteadyonme chapter 1 . 9/23/2013
On a side note. 'flaming Man Of Iron' can go suck it. I get everyone having an opinion but are you stupid?! It's all about Pack Mentality, sure you may not hug your guy friends like that but a pack would. It's like a brother to brother relationship!
| gosteadyonme chapter 11 . 9/23/2013
I can't even think of how many times I've read this story now! Ha, it's this last chapter, it pops into my head all the time I just have to read it! It's one of my favourites of the series, the BIG reveal. Although it ties with the dinner scene in the Alpha story (; You're an awesome writer and this is by far in my top five fanfics! (:
| GlitterVan chapter 11 . 9/17/2013
Omg love this story read it all in two days lol.
| Lilyzinha chapter 4 . 8/29/2013
I really love the idea about Stiles learning how to handle a gun, just in season they gave him a bat but doesn't it would make more sense if he had a gun?! he's father is the sherriff
| Lilyzinha chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
I have never think about this possibility but your story is very good! i'm curious to see what difference don't having stiles presence will change things because he is the one that put peter on fire so derek could kill him
| flamanipulator chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
Hey, so I just wanted to drop a quick review to boost your numbers. I love this fic, and I'm heading over to read the sequel(s) right now. :D
| kerreb7 chapter 11 . 7/23/2013
Oh my word I loved this fic I accidentally read the next one before this but I love love love it and I'm going to reread the next one then the one after that and I'm going to review and love these fics as if they were my pets I would say children only I'm no good with kids
| zephyr hb chapter 11 . 6/29/2013
this was cute and awesome, tnks
| charming2drew chapter 11 . 6/26/2013
Love. Love. Love.
So much love for this story.
You are a brilliant writer.
| bubble1596 chapter 11 . 6/25/2013
I enjoyed this immensely and I'm actually a little surprised I enjoyed it so much since usually I NEED romance to get me through a story but you are a wonderful writer who did an exceptional job at keeping my interest peaked. Great job and wonderful story. :)
| Flaming Man of Iron chapter 11 . 6/20/2013
Very weird on the guy cuddling thing, I do not like it all, if it was so natural, why isn't Scott or Lydia doing a lot more cuddling with Stiles? Otherwise a fairly well written story.