|Reviews for Evolution|
| darkerego chapter 7 . 3/1
| Jonharper chapter 7 . 2/27
No offense but in their rush to dazzle the Citadel representative someone handed the President the idiot ball. Seriously this guy was fucking stupid. I started to see it in the last chapter but it was definitely on display here. You don't freely give away information and show capabilities like that! In fact most of the sections with the USIR interacting with the Citadel were a real let down. Too much showing off 'how awesome we are'. It got annoying. The saving grace was the piece with General Stone and his plans for the Shanxi system. The USIR got real lucky there. Huge find of a resource rich star system like that, and it's about to be a trade hub system? One with significant civilian and Military infrastructure to defend itself? Smart. Very smart. That got me excited there. General Stone acting like the Smart seasoned badass I always knew he was, so Kudos there.
Overall this chapter was a let down especially after such a long wait. The plot really didn't advance forward, too much boasting of how awesome the USIR is and the Citadel acting like they've never seen something so magnificent before. DN7 you disappointed me here. I KNOW you're better than this. I've seen it. I absolutely love your stories but you definitely didn't bring your A game to this update. But I'll stick with it as you and your stories are worth it.
| jabbarulez chapter 7 . 2/21
I'd expect a glancing blow from a sniper rifle to blow something off! especially since its a .85 caliber round!
| Deimos99340 chapter 7 . 2/18
Interesting. Looking forwards to your next update.
| Freeride600 chapter 7 . 2/13
Holy, thanks for another kickass cameo! The 517th 'trio' ended up fitting in real well as a greeting party of sorts.
anyhow, for the rest of the chapter, well done! I do like Hall's character, and i think you're doing a great job of portraying his complexity. definitely not a flat persona.
| darkfinder chapter 7 . 2/13
wonder what happen . next and what the council will do .
| l3ct0r chapter 7 . 2/13
no my top game... but a good one
the x-over is a good one keep working and uploading
thanks by share
| RoyalTwinFangs chapter 7 . 2/8
Very nice chapter.
| Vanhishikha chapter 7 . 2/8
I'll start off by saying I started reading this on a whim and was quickly drawn in to the point where I powered through all seven chapters without getting distracted once (something that with my flightiness rarely, if ever, happens).
I think Hall is an incredibly charming guy and I can only imagine where you'll be taking his character. I think he's incredibly intelligent and fast on his feet; as of right now to me he seems like a good man but one who when provoked would utterly decimate any perceived threat.
I really love the Asari commandos and their interaction with Hackett as well. I hope there will be more!
This is one of the most interesting crossover/first contact fanfics I've read yet. I must admit I've never played Section 8 so I had to look into it after I started reading to really understand more about what was going on; it's a really neat premise!
I can honestly say I felt bad for Desolas when he was killed (something I never thought would happen) and I can only imagine what Saren will do in the future and how future conflict with him and Corde might play out as I don't imagine him just letting it go.
I'd leave a longer and more detailed review on my thoughts of what I've read so far but unfortunately my brain is a bit fried from overwork so I'll finish up by saying I hope what I wrote made sense and also that this story is fascinating and I really can't wait to see where you go with it! I think you've done an amazing job so far and I'll definitely be sticking around for future updates! :)
| inuboy86 chapter 7 . 2/8
Awesome update and relations between Humans and Asari are going well, please continue soon.
| edboy4926 chapter 7 . 2/8
| Vasun05 chapter 7 . 2/8
I am so glad I followed but I'm also saddened that any of your stories weren't continued still I'm wondering how the Salarians might feel when they see this or the stereotypical AI hatred comes out. As for Saren, you went with the bad guy route it's very rare that they have one where he turns out to be a good guy but still love it. Keep it up please.
| Zomvee chapter 7 . 2/8
Great story mate. I do hope you get the next chapter up quickly.
| Jouaint chapter 7 . 2/8
Magnificent chapter. As always.
| Just a Crazy-Man chapter 7 . 2/8
Love it you live!