Reviews for A Change of the Heart
Guest chapter 24 . 8/30
Cool! Is there another chapter for this story?
BloodyNightScream chapter 23 . 8/18
sorry i gotta make this review quick "

but awesome chapter again! it was very deep! malcho's anger at those scars, amazing! you described them so well!

the end made me laugh so hard XXD
Guest chapter 23 . 8/17
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Guest chapter 22 . 8/1
Wicked Cool! Is there another chapter for this story?
BloodyNightScream chapter 22 . 7/31
George. George. George of the jungle, watch out for that tree! 'CRASH'
lolz first thing that came to mind when i was reading that part XXD

aha this was a cute and exciting chapter (: i could feel everything they were feeling in it, all the excitement and adrenaline from her first flight, it's all there! XD now i wanna fly...x fails attempt at flying x
i love how she was freaking out about it and he's just like...'you were dying like..not even a minute ago'...lolz XD i think this chapter definitely brought the two closer together in their friendship (: my heart warmed at his proud look
at least she's landed in the pond and not a hard patch of ground " i'd take cold water over a hard spot any day

awesome chapter again! can't wait for the next chapter to come out! (:
BloodyNightScream chapter 21 . 7/29
x hits person in face with bowl x i'm not hostile at all :D
lolz jk jk XD i know she did that to get away and was by no means out of malice ;)

this is a very nice, smooth chapter. (: a nice calm chapter that is perfect to further develop the characters in the story
very smooth transitioning too awesome job on this! we finally get to dig deeper into malcho's backstory and learn a little more about him (: i love when alisha finally understood and finished his sentence for him, that was really cute /
my favorite scene with them talking though had to be,
"It's just...you know that urge you feel when you're very high up? That-that jumping feeling?"
"Si."
"Yeah...I don't have it."
high five sister! lolz that would be me XD they would either have to shove me off that branch or pick me up and throw me cus i would NEVER jump ._.

another scene i like is when jerky was fanning carpet, lolz this is what popped into my head,
'Find a magic carpet laying on the ground in fatigue, what do you do?
grab a large leaf (probably double your size) and fan it.'

lolz i laughed from that XD but it was a nice thing of jerky to do that so a gold star for jerky! X3
i love how you ended it too! i had a mixture of warmth in my chest and chills crawling down my spine from reading it (:
another great chapter! keep up the awesome work!
can't wait for the next chapter!

just remember, if you're feeling stuck. Just keep moving forward or keeping moving up (:
(a totally ooc malcho that probably got hit too many times on the head by Zadesh's cane comes in)
Malcho: yes human! keep flying forward for great things are awaiting you- CRASH!
ARGH! who put that tree there?!
me: x face palms x
Guest chapter 21 . 7/22
Cool! Is there another chapter for this story?
BloodyNightScream chapter 20 . 6/28
No no...no no no NO" WRONG! x punches Zadesh in the face x you did not discover him first, because he was already discovered by Aladdin and his group -3- so yeah...no fame for you on that basis...suck it loser! x flips zadesh off x :D

lolz sorry XD i had to XXD i really like this chapter a lot (: when Zadesh wasn't pissing me off (which surprisingly he wasn't that much) i was falling deeper in love with him as a character yes he's sadistic and such, but there's also something else to him (: this chapter gave me a more personal and deeper understanding of zadesh (though nobody will ever understand or know him completely -w-) this chapter made me laugh a lot to with all of daniel's and zadesh's actions XXD daniel was getting sassy B) taking Zadesh's spot on the bed and trying to take the book i gasp at his behavior! lolz Zadesh is such a child sometimes XD...a pissy, murderous child .w."
i love when he wanted to bash his head because of daniel and he yelled at daniel during one of daniel's tantrums that it was in the drawer to the left...i couldn't stop laughing XXD my favorite part had to be when daniel was talking and zadesh just slapped a hand over his mouth and kept going...lolz i died XXD just imagine that!

my favorite sentence had to be, "I'm fully aware of the situation on our laps, but i've been preoccupied by more important situations than a criminal charge."
lolz idk why but i loved it! XXD

and daniel...lolz "they're just being negative."...my gosh i don't even know lolz and i swear he's like the group's counselor or therapist, just from asking how zadesh was doing

daniel:"So how are you doing? c:"
everyone else: "-_-..."
Zadesh: "I feel like you should shut up."
daniel: D':

lolz XXD when it first started out with zadesh with him being naked at the waist up i was like "hold up...wait...Back it up, back it up!...WEE OHHH! WEE OHHH! ABORT ABORT! x nosebleed x" lolz yes i definitely like zadesh more XXD
but did it seriously take him hours to come up with that name? lolz it's a good name, don't get me wrong! but hours? XXD oh zadesh...you must be some sorts of stupid...i came up with 'Hell's Serpentine' within 5 seconds -w- it's not great but it's pretty good for a name :P and you think you're plans will work out so well that it's inevitable...when it took you hours to come up with a name?...i'm sorry but x puts a hand on Zadesh's shoulder x..maybe you should go into a new business or a better hobby that isn't quite as dangerous as this...lolz

Awesome work on this! and sorry this was so long (: i just really liked this chapter

P.S. yes malcho... it's just the paranoia kicking in as a group of bad guys plan your death. so go back to sleep B)
Guest chapter 20 . 6/12
Cool! Is there another chapter for this story?
BloodyNightScream chapter 19 . 5/12
aww~ this was a cute chapter ( : nice job! lolz favorite part is when malcho suggested that he would teach her how to fly and she's like "no bitch *slap*" XXD he was just crushed, ii love how you described that a hole was poked in him and he like deflated XXD i was laughing at that! i was like "oh snap!"

lolz can't wait for the next chapter!
keep up the awesome work! u
Guest chapter 19 . 5/11
Wicked Cool! Is there another chapter for this story?
BloodyNightScream chapter 18 . 5/10
yay ch. 18! : D it is a very interesting chapter, full of mystery and anticipation for what will happen next, though i thought Phasir was being more of an ass, not alisha...lolz just saying

i'm rooting for you so keep going! i'll be waiting eagerly for the next chapter (:
BloodyNightScream chapter 17 . 5/10
awesome work on this chapter! i love how deep the conversation between alisha and aatif got, made me think on things. it also gave me a happiness that even though it's a story there are still good people out there who will help you despite all the idiots out there hurting you because you're different.
keep up the awesome work! i can't wait to read more!
p.s. love jerky and his childish ways on trying to steal fish and wanting that ruby and being crushed when he couldn't have it...poor baby x pets jerky x
lolz and how Zadesh would have scoffed at Aatif, that made me laugh
Eternal Sidekick chapter 18 . 4/14
Wonderful character building chapters! Really looking forward to Phasir's impending visit.

Keep up the amazing work!
Guest chapter 18 . 4/14
Moreeeeeeeeee! I love this story, it must go on. I need to find out what happens next...
updateeeeeeeee pleaseeeeeeeee!
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