|Reviews for The Deal|
| 92Dil chapter 20 . 12/13/2013
Just as it should have been.
| bettycapote chapter 20 . 8/10/2013
This was such a brilliant story. It was lovely, romantic and suspensful at times. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing such a wonderful story with us.
| bettycapote chapter 18 . 8/10/2013
Again I can't stop reading this story and the ending of this ch just made me jump. Owen will be alright, right? :[
| bettycapote chapter 16 . 8/10/2013
Oh no please don't tell me...
I'm so engrossed in this story. I love it.
| bettycapote chapter 15 . 8/10/2013
Oh oh the papayas are coming! Poor Cristina is in a shock of her life with not only one papaya but two.
| bettycapote chapter 14 . 8/10/2013
A fat juicy plum and a papaya love the terms you used for the fetus'.
| bettycapote chapter 13 . 8/10/2013
I would love to see Cristina pregnant. Cristina having a child with Owen is the best thing she could've done.
| bettycapote chapter 10 . 8/10/2013
This ch. left me breathless.
Cristina: "I'm glad you chose me" - sweet
As I'm reading I wish I was watching this on Tv. Love to see Cristina and Owen facial expressions.
| bettycapote chapter 12 . 8/10/2013
"how are you and my poppy seed doing?" So sweet.
our raspberry, not one raspberry but two. This was cute and endearing how Cristina wanted to surprise Owen.
| bettycapote chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
What can I say...I'm hooked...yet again! :)
| luvhobie chapter 20 . 3/27/2013
I love happy stories. And happy stories with Owen and Cristina are even better. Thank you for sharing. I really enjoyed this story!
| Guest chapter 20 . 2/19/2013
What a wonderful ending! The twins are adorable! How sweet was Eva calling out her parent's names while Jonathan was engrossed with a toy when C/O were walking down the aisle together. Very nice to know that the others had happy endings too especially Alex & Izzie along with Heather and Shane. The ceremony was very romantic and go Owen with the kiss! Really loved this take on older C/O finding each other again as true soulmates do and having a huge life together with their twins. Thank you for fulfilling our fangirl C/O wishes through your stories. Look forward to the rest of LM and your new stories.
| McFluffy501 chapter 20 . 2/18/2013
I really enjoyed this story and am sad to see it end so soon. I think you should write an epilogue because I would love to get to know the twins better and see where life takes them. Nonetheless, this story had me hooked all the way through. I look forward to reading more stories of yours in the future!
| Caseyscooby chapter 20 . 2/17/2013
Very good story. I don't know why but it was this story that helped to realize that Cristina and Owen will be ok. I am glad that she agreed to a small wedding, but I really think that if it happens again, than they will go to City Hall. I hope you will have a brand new story coming soon. I would to see one where she is a single mom and Owen is living a bachelor life.
| carmen chapter 20 . 2/17/2013
such a wonderful chapter. Loved the ending where they remembered the first day they met. Thank you once again for writing these wonderful stories. I always look forward to reading a new chapter and/or story.