*snicker* Hippo-whaty-thingy.

I don’t think Percy would go fishing cuz he’s related to fish right?with the whole Poseidon thing I think he’d be sea animal rights activist of all sea animal rights activists.

Loved it!

The best sentence in this whole fanfiction is “Hey, Percy! Bye, Percy!”

I LOVE THIS

I love that Nico was in there, and I love that Paul thought Percy was insane at first.

Man I loved this story! It was absolutely awesome! Great great great story!

Awesome story! Abolsutely amazing! I loved it so much! Percy showing off his powers makes me happy! I LOVED IT SO MUCH!

Hey man! I really love your ideas and i like your story a lot as well. My only constructive critism is:
You keep switching from present to past. Try to keep it in one time sense, otherwise it can be confusing. Example, "Percy looked surprised, and Paul doesnt..." looked is past, doesnt is present. Try either looked and didn't, if you're aiming for past.
Also, this story is very fast paced. While this is not always a bad thing, if you move too quickly the story nor the characters develop as deeply. I certainly would have loved to see a more emotional side of Paul when he learned the truth, and saw it with his own eyes.
Keep up the good work! 3

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I've gone purple!

Love it! 'Can't touch this!'

Happy fun time!

THIS IS FREAKING AWESOME!'

Yay Nico cameos!

Of I love it SSOOO exciting! Fluttershy