Reviews for Scorched Wings
Numbuh 227 chapter 4 . 12/10/2012
Nice good work!
Depthcharge2030 chapter 4 . 12/9/2012
Well, this is a treat. Two stories updated in one day. Sweet.
Jackrkazi141FTW chapter 3 . 11/15/2012
That darkness goddess is really ominous, by the way, it seems kind of odd to have a Kid Icarus video game in a universe where Pit actually exists.
Starry-eyed dreamer86 chapter 3 . 11/15/2012
YAY! Fybi feels all better! .
Depthcharge2030 chapter 3 . 11/14/2012
Well that was a quick fix. Good chapter as usual.
Agent Numbuh 227 chapter 3 . 11/14/2012
Oh is Fybi gonna regain her wings? Or Something?
Keep the good work!
Starry-eyed dreamer86 chapter 2 . 11/13/2012
Aww! Poor Fybi! she may ever fly again and Viridi's laughing! Why I outtac Let me at her let me at! Here George! Hold this! *gives George end of shirt*
George: *taes it* Okay!
Me: Let me at her! Let me at here!
George: Okay! *Lets go*
Me: I think your missing the point here.
George: Oh. Sorry.
Me: *sigh* Anyway...Haha! Aranea completly failed at cheering her up! Haha!
Agent Numbuh 227 chapter 2 . 11/13/2012
It got some thi ta do with her scarf?
Hehe, Chris worrying about the Murphys.
So after you finish this, what are you gonna do?
Depthcharge2030 chapter 2 . 11/12/2012
She basically lost a limb, not something you can get over so easily. Bu yeah, i'm pretty sure a bullet to the head is Phosphora's weakness.
Divachick86 chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
DX Aw! Poor Fybi! *sniffle* The battle scene was pretty epic though. :D
Depthcharge2030 chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
Nature Wars. Casualties: Fybi's wings. The world just gets darker.
Agent Numbuh 227 chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
Oh no! Not Fybi! Great begining! Wow Phosphora is a great opponent! Geez Zach and Maddy got toasted by her, that had to hurt! Ow!
ZACH: It sure did!
MADDY: Not as much as the angel freak.
ME: Watch that mouth you two!
Keep updating!