Reviews for The Uninvited Vistor 'Part II'
GeekyLola chapter 3 . 3/24/2006
this story was good. can't wait for the next chapter.
Bob chapter 1 . 5/10/2005
Its good
dkg chapter 3 . 12/14/2002
hey its a good start, and it seems cool that zack has a mysterious twin brother, but would this twin brother cause touble anyway? Please continue!
syl77 chapter 1 . 11/23/2002

Great job. BTW, though, this is really bothering me. It's Zack, not Zach. Please get the name right.
SweetieChick01 chapter 2 . 9/2/2002
please please please please please update!
syl77 chapter 2 . 8/9/2002
More more more more more! I don't like how Sarah is being so heartless about Zack "cheating" on her, and I think Kelly neeeds to loosen up and appreciate what an awkward moment that was for Zack.


P.S. Aside from that, great story! One more thing, though...ADD MORE SPENCE!
jakeslover chapter 2 . 8/4/2002
What, what, what? Please, continue, I'm dying to know who (or rather what!) is standing behind Zack! Your story is great, plz continue!
shelby2155 chapter 2 . 7/27/2002
Keep going! i want to know what happens next