Reviews for Captive Hearts
anotherguest chapter 45 . 2/17/2021
loved this story but sadly its not finished...would love to know how it all goes on
Brenda Joyeux1 chapter 45 . 11/10/2019
I've very much enjoy this story and waiting patiently for new chapters.
Guest chapter 41 . 10/23/2019
Magnifique chapitre.
Brenda Joyeux chapter 45 . 10/23/2019
Almost, John. You're on the right ttack.
Brenda Joyeux chapter 30 . 10/21/2019
Just a tiny error. The Queen Mum should have said "Mon pauvre John" instead of "Ma pauvre John". Since 'ma' indicate she's talking to a girl. But really it's almost nothing.
Llala chapter 45 . 9/8/2019
Wonderful story !
L chapter 45 . 9/5/2019
So happy to see an update :)
fartingunicorns chapter 45 . 9/1/2019
So happy to see an update :)
Itsaso Adhara chapter 45 . 8/23/2019
Welcome back, my dear. I missed your story. But Ill been wait.
Lolita-mist chapter 45 . 8/22/2019
An update! Hoorraaayyy!

Really appreciate the update to this epic story. Looking forward to many more to come.

EJ 12212012 chapter 45 . 8/19/2019
So glad to see you are still with us. 3
Great work as always.
Kat chapter 45 . 8/19/2019
Delighted squeal of joy! A wonderful new chapter!
I loved the bit with Azrail but please don't let John think that MORAN is his new love?! *Reaching for the smelling salts!*
Thank you for this story!
IAMSHERLOCKED1234 chapter 45 . 8/18/2019
I am always so excited when this story gets updated! Please please update again soon!
Death'sDarkAngel chapter 44 . 7/19/2018
This story is fantastic! I'm so sad that it's not completed. You write beautifully and you've captured the characters' personalities wonderfully.
Pineapple3000 chapter 1 . 9/19/2017
Lovely chapter. Some French errors however. "Rendormir" is the infinitive tense of the verb, as in "to go back to sleep". In this case, where Sherlock is telling John to go back to sleep, the verb tense is "impératif", and so the correct phrase is "Rendors-toi". Also, "Ma pauvre" is feminin. Thus, saying "Ma pauvre John" is insinuating that John is a woman. Simply replace the feminin "ma" with the masculine "mon".
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