Reviews for Captive Hearts |
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![]() ![]() loved this story but sadly its not finished...would love to know how it all goes on |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've very much enjoy this story and waiting patiently for new chapters. |
![]() ![]() Magnifique chapitre. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Almost, John. You're on the right ttack. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just a tiny error. The Queen Mum should have said "Mon pauvre John" instead of "Ma pauvre John". Since 'ma' indicate she's talking to a girl. But really it's almost nothing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful story ! |
![]() ![]() So happy to see an update :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() So happy to see an update :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Welcome back, my dear. I missed your story. But Ill been wait. |
![]() ![]() ![]() An update! Hoorraaayyy! Really appreciate the update to this epic story. Looking forward to many more to come. AM |
![]() ![]() ![]() So glad to see you are still with us. 3 Great work as always. |
![]() ![]() Delighted squeal of joy! A wonderful new chapter! I loved the bit with Azrail but please don't let John think that MORAN is his new love?! *Reaching for the smelling salts!* Thank you for this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am always so excited when this story gets updated! Please please update again soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is fantastic! I'm so sad that it's not completed. You write beautifully and you've captured the characters' personalities wonderfully. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely chapter. Some French errors however. "Rendormir" is the infinitive tense of the verb, as in "to go back to sleep". In this case, where Sherlock is telling John to go back to sleep, the verb tense is "impératif", and so the correct phrase is "Rendors-toi". Also, "Ma pauvre" is feminin. Thus, saying "Ma pauvre John" is insinuating that John is a woman. Simply replace the feminin "ma" with the masculine "mon". |