|Reviews for Done|
| Underthelivingmoon chapter 1 . 3/2
That was ridiculously sexy. *fans self* Well done.
| Hot In Az chapter 1 . 11/2/2013
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/30/2013
A really good way to ruin a story is to use terms such as "the blonde". Our brains are conditioned to hear names, the same names, over and over again. It's jarring when you use a different term than the characters name. Just use Lauren's name. Every time. It would make the fic 10x better.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/20/2013
Wow super frikkin hot! And really well written! Thanks for sharing, Bo and Lauren are awesome together. :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/18/2013
Uhhhhhhhhhh...yeah. I may or may not need to reenact this entire fic irl.
I also may or may not re-read this fic many, many times. For science. For humanity. For the children. But mostly for my perving :-)
| hihalley chapter 1 . 8/13/2013
I think I found a new favorite fic!
| somewhataddicted chapter 1 . 4/29/2013
Totally. Fucking. Hot! Well done!
| soccerfred01 chapter 1 . 4/1/2013
HOLY FUCK AMAZING
| Athena64 chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
Beautifully written... tender and passionate and sweet... thank you!
| erw-fan chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
Is it hot in here? Wow...I will probably be more coherent later, but right now...just wow.
| Claire chapter 1 . 2/7/2013
Sexiest. Fanfiction. Ever..
My god! please write something else about that couple
| WorldOfTilt chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
Very sexy & I love how you write Lauren :)
| FiercePixie7 chapter 1 . 1/16/2013
That's was hot!
| CherubimDI chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
| mistyfiedbycopeland1 chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
OMD that was uh it was (THUD)