Reviews for A twist in the line up
Guest chapter 9 . 4/30/2013
Keep it up :)
Guest chapter 3 . 4/30/2013
Love Krayonder and I always fell sorry for him cos he is the one that Taz takes her anger out on. And he's like super funny man -whoaaaa!-
Anyway. Pretty cool so far, keep writing!
StarKidAbbie chapter 11 . 2/4/2013
Thanks, you concentrated a lot more now and there are less grammar errors! Sorry im just a grammar nazi! lol! Love this story, it's really cute. And write some TUp please! -
De Commander chapter 7 . 12/30/2012
Brilliant as usual :) And TUp, TUp, TUp! I hope you update soon and maybe some more TUp in the near future ;)
StarKidAbbie chapter 5 . 12/22/2012
this is a very good story and I would love you to write more, but THERE ARE SO MANY GRAMMATICAL ERRORS! Please concentrate more when you are writing pleeeeaaaaassseee. Keep writing
livvie23 chapter 5 . 12/17/2012
haha you're funny
i'm not officially a beta but i'm starting to work towards it... anywho, if you ever want your stuff edited i'd be happy to take a look at it :))