|Reviews for Fourth Time Lucky|
| falconrukichi chapter 1 . 6/13
Sweeeeeet..about how Hal pointed out Lauders is.
| Ksandbrook chapter 1 . 7/13/2014
please please continue with one more chapter, like a first date or the alien invasion. please please super inlove with this fanfiction.
| Dmerch322 chapter 1 . 8/14/2013
I couldn't agree with you more! Hal and Maggie are NOT a good match. She always has that same dumb look on her face. now granted; i do like them as friends (like 2 cop partners). Hal and Lourdes I hope will be together soon and forever!
| momentweneverhad chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
What should I say... Very cute !
Hal beeing so unsure about asking her out. Just nice !
| Sarah L chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
I hope you're planning to do more little AU's like this, they're cute. :D
| hystereks chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
aw! that's all i have to say. this is cute. :) really love hal/lourdes fluffy fanfics!