Reviews for Reunion With a Forgotten Soul
Meatbun Attack chapter 10 . 3/12/2013
Woah, Mary is one crazy girl... Please update soon! :)
Random Reviewer chapter 10 . 2/17/2013
Awwww, so cute! I like how Garry is still trying to be tough and strong for Ib, but the big-brother act isn't working as well because she's all grown up and can see that he's scared. I think it's cute that it's all awkward between them and they dont know what to say to each other, though it's kinda sad that Garry has all these memories of Ib, but Ib only has a few (albeit nice) memories of him. Can't wait for number 11! :)
Random Reviewer chapter 9 . 2/17/2013
I dont know quite what I think of Mary's diary. Really, I think that what's written doesnt seem much like her, too... I dont know, like grown up, I suppose. Like she shouldnt be as level-headed sounding about it. She should be ranting about how awful Ib is for pushing her and how much she hates Garry and how Ib is starting to turn into Garry (cuz Garry did the same thing, once upon a time), not so focused and, though resentful, not as suddenly hell-bent on revenge. Wasn't she already plotting that before? THere'd be no need for her to SUDDENLY decide she wants to make Ib suffer...
Random Reviewer chapter 8 . 2/17/2013
Finally! Garry makes an appearance (kinda)! I still dont understand how Garry can see what Ib is doing without Ib being in front of his painting. I like how the flashbacks/memories are mostly just making Ib wonder about Garry and distrust Mary more. I'd fav and follow this if I had an account... that will have to be remedied later.
Random Reviewer chapter 7 . 2/17/2013
I couldnt help but laugh uncontrollably when Garry was primping! THAT was hilarious, even though it was like a sentence. It's kinda sweet but ridiculous how Garry's worrying over how he looks. Cracked me up. Still, I couldnt help but hope that there would be more of an exciting struggle between Ib and Mary, maybe ending with Ib fighting the palette knife from her. Which, now that I think of it, why DIDNT Ib take the knife when Mary was knocked out? Just too freaked to think of it, I guess, and went running instead...
Random Reviewer chapter 6 . 2/17/2013
I cant help but admire the irony in Mary seeming to think Ib is stupid while Ib gets it immediately and is just pretending to try and use Mary, though it seems to me that Mary would have tried to draw out the time spent with Ib longer before trying to kill her, considering how long she spent with Ib and Garry in the game. Though, it also seems strange that Mary would seem to forget about all the creepy/scary messages she gave to Ib and expect her to just follow along without suspecting anything.
Random Reviewer chapter 5 . 2/17/2013
So... Why can Garry see Ib through his frame and Ib not see him? Is he like moving through the pictures she passes or his his picture just everywhere or is it just showing him what's happening for the sake of it or something? That confuses me...
Random Reviewer chapter 4 . 2/17/2013
Awww, I dont think Garry's too corny! 'Sides, he always was more worried about Ib than he was himself, even though he's been scared out of his wits or confused beyond belief for the majority of everything. I like how you added that everything in the gallery is meaner now, eviller and stuff, and more out for blood than before. Will Garry be able to leave his painting eventually?
Random Reviewer chapter 3 . 2/17/2013
Hmmm... well... Is Garry going to be walking around now? And I'm not sure if I like that it's not going into detail about solving puzzles (in maybe alternate ways than when you're playing?) and how Ib just kind of dismisses that she can get through them so easily. Though I guess it makes sense, considering how she's scared and all and stuff. I thought maybe she'd get a memory of Garry when she was looking in the mirror, but nope...
Random Reviewer chapter 2 . 2/17/2013
I HATE Mary. But... I kind of pity her too :( Eh, I like Garry's POV at the end, how he contemplates everything and is thinking about how much Ib's grown. Nice dramatic ending sentence, btw ;P
Random Reviewer chapter 1 . 2/17/2013
What a coinkydink! It's my first time reading an Ib fanfic! Well, you're obviously quite talented at writing (though naturally or from much practice, no one could know), as the sentences flow well and such, but talent is cheap and what I'm really looking for is a wonderful story line that wont make me sad like all but one of the endings of Ib. I approve of Ib's thinking process, though it feels strange to me that she'd just jump into the painting on account of curiosity. Still, onward shall be read! *dramatic clicketh of Next button*
harrylee94 chapter 10 . 2/16/2013
Mary's scary...
Brilliant chapter! I don't care if it was late, it was still awesome :)
Look forward to more!
Frozefeet99 chapter 9 . 2/15/2013
please make another chapter PLEASE IM DYING TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS
Meatbun Attack chapter 9 . 2/13/2013
Yay! Garry's free!
harrylee94 chapter 9 . 2/2/2013
But will the book break it?
Loving the story! I look forward to more!
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