Reviews for Asphyxia
fictive chapter 1 . 11/11/2013
Wow, excellent writing, I just loved this and it wasn't out of character, or well, not too much ;)
Thanks again !
LettaSmith chapter 1 . 6/29/2013
that was perfect. Not much else to say.
TanyaPotter chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
I dont really like smoking either- but you made it sexy! Love it!
Gato Jazz chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
I'm sorry I didn't review before, I just had the story in favorites and nothing else, so, sorry :)
I L.O.V.E. this. The title, the summary, the story, the author's note at the end (wich I agree one hundred per cent).
From the story I like everything, that the characters are this two, the place (Daryl's tent), the catalyst, all phrases (for example, "the wet smacking of their mouths as erotic as it is embarrassing"), the whole idea.
And of course, the story image.
I know I probably forgot a lot of things, but just wanted to come here, say hello and thank you for writing this :)
MerucielagoLust chapter 1 . 12/24/2012
Holy god. This fic was awesome. Loved all the details. Very well written. I, myself, love Daryl with Glenn. Just seems so right...but that maybe cuz i'm a yaoi fanatic. Lol. Anyway, this was very fun and interesting to read. You're a very good writer.
Ayathul chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
THIS IS THE WRITING OF GODS. I'm lying here reading this thinking "HOW CAN SOMEONE WRITE THIS GOOD?!". You did an AMAZING job! 8D
Rebellwithoutacause chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
This really was an exellently written one-shot. Somehow Daryl ends up frequently being paired with Glenn but despite the unlikely odds, this scenario felt real, and the detail was intense and richly fullfilling. It felt like being there without being obtrusive. You're a very talented writer, keep it up!
Pass the Porn Tea chapter 1 . 12/1/2012
Yum. Me likey. That is all.
californiabound17 chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
Absolutely adored this. I love the Glenn/Daryl pairing. Awesome job!
SuperSalami chapter 1 . 11/21/2012
I don't care how out of character this is, it's a wonderful story. Besides, if this were to happen in the series I could see it sounding/looking a lot like this. Your writing style is beautiful; it was enthralling to read this because of the poeticness the entire thing had. I really like how it wasn't completely focused on just the sexual parts; sure, that was the biggest part of it, but there was an obvious undertone of how they felt towards each other (like the nervousness they both felt) but it didn't need to defined, it was just there. I myself don't really care for smoking; it's not disgusting to me or anything, but like others have said this did make it seem rather sexy. This is honestly one of my favorite short stories/one shots/ whatever you wanna call it that I have read, and I do hope you'll do more of TWD, maybe Daryl because he is my favorite!

Thanks for writing it, it was an amazng read [:
Larienn chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
Ok, Daryl can survive falling from a cliff twice, having his boot gnawed by a walker, being pierced in the torso by his own arrow and walking back after all those wounds only to be shot in the head. What else? oh yes, he can make smoking be sexy!

PROPS TO YOU! I loved the way you wrote this
JackJackSkellington chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
asdfghjkl I love this so much!
CastielHunter chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
Wow, this is really good! You didn't make it out of character at all! Smoking is gross, but who cares? Makes Daryl all the more sexy ;) I like how well written this is and how you made the whole situation kind of realistic. I hate Maggie, anyway! Glenn and Daryl are much better together!
cygnus chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
It's gross for sure but since this is the apocalypse what's a little lung cancer and yellow stained teeth right? That said this is incredibly sexy and well written, I don't find it out of character at all. There's different levels of virginity as you know :-) As for Maggie, the tv version, I don't see any attraction or love there, she's a practical farm girl so she's with Glenn out of pure necessity, last guy on earth and all that. If they'd let Glenn and Daryl get together it would be an epic romance.