Reviews for Diez Fleur: Akumas' Love Voyage
whywolfcity chapter 9 . 7/21/2013
This chapter is great, don't worry! (Despite the kind of oddly described fight scenes, but I can't exactly write those either so I can't hate.) The characterization was especially impressive in this situation. I'm loving the way that Franky and Nami are meddling, though! Great chapter, as usual. :)
Tomoe-Gozen27 chapter 9 . 7/21/2013
NO, i'm not yet ready for the last chapter! please don't end it..keep it going for like, forever..LOL.. and you really are so good, you made me hate tashigi even more..nyahahaha
Otaku-SIG chapter 9 . 7/21/2013
Poor Robin x_x
And hell, yes, I'm ready for the last chapter! _ I'm sad it's ending but... yay!
zorobin4you chapter 9 . 7/21/2013
hi,i was surprised that you updated ,thank you for the update,i like chapter next month huh,well, it's breaking my heart but it's you for this wonderful luck for the last chapter.
1004-Angel chapter 9 . 7/20/2013
Whoa whoa whoa. Last chapter next month? I have a problem with this announcement!
Nice LuNa hint there. Loved it. XD
Honestly, I forgot this took place pretimeskip, and thought "Why do they need sea prism stone? Luffy has badass Haki!" And then I remembered. And I was kinda sad. And then happy again because it was a good chapter.
I look forward to the conclusion. I'm expecting something magnificent!
Seis Fleur chapter 8 . 7/6/2013
Nooooo! Smoker! Tash!

I like it. I like the suspense! Have I told you I liked the idea of Franky being Robin's best friend, or somewhat? (Though I secretly ship Frobin too, but no more than Zorobin).
1004-Angel chapter 8 . 7/6/2013
And you're getting mad at me about cliffhangers!? What's that, the typically-Hollywood cliche ending or the very thing you and I hate most!?
Rant aside, it was very good. Robin has her emotions in place, everything is working out and BAM! Smoker shows his ugly mug. What a wonderful welcome-home gift. XD
Anyway, loved it, as usual. I have the next Whispers chapter written I just need to type it up. Should be available Monday or Tuesday. Good luck on the update! :)
MasterCool chapter 8 . 6/29/2013
I'm fashionably late, as always...
Great chapter! I don't think I reviewed for your last chapter, so sorry about that, but it was awesome none the less. I thought this chapter was one of the best, mainly because I enjoy calm and trusting relationships between Zoro and Robin. You did just that, with them sharing a 'nice' drink together at the bar and going shopping and fighting marines and being captured by a guy who can turn into smoke and all that other stuff ordinary couples do...:) But anyway, good chapter!

Although that guy in the bar was REALLY pissing me off, and I almost started clapping when Zoro decked him.

-Keep up the great work!
whywolfcity chapter 8 . 6/26/2013
This chapter was so bittersweet for me. I love that we got a glimpse of Zoro and Robin's official relationship - a lovely and realistic glimpse, complete with great characterization and deep conversation - but, GAH, if that grimy bastard had just left Robin alone, Zoro wouldn't have had to try and be the hero and all that. That turn of events, however, is what made the chapter great. Can't wait for the next one.

- Angela

P.S. this was a fantastic early birthday present to me, getting to read a new chapter of one of my favourite stories. so thank you for this lovely coincidence!
Otaku-SIG chapter 8 . 6/26/2013
Wooow so many things! Zoro is adorable... Can't wait for more.
The Tell-Tale Man chapter 8 . 6/25/2013
Great chapter for putting the drama and suspense into it when Zoro and Robin were captured by the marines so please keep up the update soon.
Polyamory chapter 7 . 6/22/2013

the story could end at this point, but it would still be perfect. Thanks for publishing
Whatsherface739 chapter 1 . 6/16/2013

Okay... So first of all, I just HAVE to say, that was AMAZING! Damn! My fanfics suck compared to yours! :D
I stayed up until 5 in the morning just to read the rest. There was not a single boring part in the whole thing. I loved how you hit every single character's personalities spot-on, because in my opinion, that's one of the hardest things to do(especially when you have a hot-headed and stubborn character like Zoro with so many boundaries that you have to keep reminding yourself of). I also liked how you backed up a lot of situations with quotes and memories from things that had actually previously happened somewhere along the ever-extending journey of OP. It for sure made it seem more official, like it would really happen; like the whole thing with Kuina. No doubt I could see that happening.
I absolutely loved(and did I mention... LOVED) the story, it will definitely be my first fav, but it could use a little proofreading here and there. Also just the repetition of the same terms being used for descriptions(such as raven-haired beauty and, uh... other stuff). Those are very minor flaws, though... I would DIE if you wrote more! You inspire me. Keep it up, you got some major talent!
Mr Khan chapter 7 . 6/14/2013
Good stuff so far, though i wonder where you plan on taking it from here.

It was a good idea to avoid doing much more in the way of lemon. Porn is porn, pretty much, and the best effect of the lemon (aside from fan-service) is to break romantic tension, the payoff of all the buildup.
Mr Khan chapter 3 . 6/10/2013
I like this so far, though it's a little rough around the edges.

Advice to fix: word choice. Your grammar and syntax are usually spot on (enough that the errors are easy to overlook), but what drags this down is your diction in some cases, especially notable in the words you use for eyes, like "optics" or "hues" (i'm not sure either of those are actually proper usage of those words). Using the same word too often is bad, but you tend to run into the opposite problem. Sometimes keeping it simple is better. I noticed this with a few other words, too. It's okay to call black hair black, or to simply refer to people by their names.

Stuff I liked: Your Zoro-Robin interplay. I feel like you keep them almost perfectly in character (though there is nothing in canon to imply that they would be shy about expressing their feelings, you make that interpretation believable without having them act out of character, having most of their anxieties play out internally).

Looking forward to reading the next four chapters.
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